Young Dollar vs (X)eed
 

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Check in by: 07-16-05 at 03:25 AM

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waitin on u too accpet 1st aiight??

(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 03:37 AM.

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 11:38 AM.

aiight... im droppin now k... soo yer.. u drop too

Hes got his first note, decides to save it into the "PIGGY"
The child's lost.........this battle too, like "babe pig in the city"
playin his coins safe....................... livin life as a gamble
He has lost it all,please free fone "1-800 MY LIFE'S A SCANDAL
He Prays, & wants to be like "50Cent" dreams to become huge
he aint even "half that" and still "lives in the Cube"
"living outside the square" he trys to become famous
the only thing seperatin this child from Fame is his Anus
Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
despite the man's fate he never be a "young buck"
"straight outta trashville" he dont have nuff money for his Bus
Winnin' for him is like a streak at the lottery
"and the winner is" young dollar for the best role of Comedy
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type

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haha wit interest too.....
and the 1-800 number thin is like a number .... where if u suffer from gamblin problems you can call that up and ask 4 counciellors... aiight

Aiight waitin on u 2 drop..i have mate

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waitin on you............................... to drop

No beef Dog bust since you R.A.W. and im Livin Legend gotta smash it. Let gett it poppin


Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil
And I can tell you really got this rap Game bent up and twisted
Just cuz ya gota Banks Mixtape, Dont mean ya Lyricaly Gifted
Homie you aint really real like Saint Nick livin in the North Pole
Ya workin Salvation Army shifts is da only way ya own my Sole(Soul)
N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight
Can't beleive you said you kick up dust and cough till ya stir up spit
U can be CuriousGeorge N toss monkey fetus Nstill not stir up hot shit
Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard


Explanations:
Bar 1- He has a battle with 4Fil and right now he loosin
Bar 2- He recivese Banks mixtape and thinks he lyricaly gifted, like wit rhymes your lyricaly gifted. Pretty simple when u think about it
Bar 3- In his sig it says He ownin Souls, and Salvation Army has Old shirts pants and shoes,and shoes have Soles old shoes soles yall get it right
Bar 4- pretty simple cant slang his weight in drugs or just cant slang his weight pretty much simple
Bar5-As yall know monkeys toss shit He curious George,,,,,cant stir up hot shit as in hot rhymes
Bar 6- Throwin trash talkin into a black bag to ya lips the trash aint gettin that far, and broken old cars get smashed at Junk yards......their yall go

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Voted For: Young Dollar

Please don't use my name in your verses..... good punch though....... you clearly win.... structures good... the verse flowed alright.... (x)...... just didnt come hard enough man

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil
And I can tell you really got this rap Game bent up and twisted
Just cuz ya gota Banks Mixtape, Dont mean ya Lyricaly Gifted

Good first two bars. young... those won it for you...

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

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by the way....... you shouldnt put in explanations...... if the ounch is good.... it should be hard hitting yet easy to understand..... by the way.... return the favour... drop a vote

alright preciate it i'll remember that............uppin........

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