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"It Wasn't You"..Yeah, new track..Half Breed & L Veracity..Watch out for our mixtape!
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www.myspace.com/thehalfbreedonline Word up Hook:Lauren Hill Verse One:Half Breed Hook:Lauren Hill Verse Two:L Veracity Hook:Lauren Hill Verse Three:Half Breed Hook:Lauren Hill Word this is taken from "Operation H-H" coming soon! Ima update w links |
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yerrr dope little track ya got here yo. beats nice as hell, Young U ya deliverys kool, lyrics are nice for this type of track, flow stays on, volume levels perfect, although i aint sure if this is type of track suits ya style, ya still did ya thing on it, and did a good job of it. L, you impressed me actually, ya come across as quite a good femcee, in this track, to me, flows real kool, deliverys perfect, lyrics are fine, yerr ya had a nice verse on this aswell. good shit yo, keep up the good work both of you :thumbup:
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ok... ok.... beat was different... i'm feeling that jump-off right there.... wasn't sure how the hook was gonna fit but that shyt was type smooth... kudos for that...
UNF... lol... you came a long way man.... ya quality is so much better it's almost scary...lol... it's still not perfected...but the shyt's better than mine.... lol... and i was giving YOU pointers on how to adjust ya shyt at one point... but uhhh... i gotta fix for my issues...lol..werd... L. VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! holla atcha boy! ya flipped it with that last line... "had to tell him i had AIDS"...whoa... then the hook... crazy... only thing really hurting you on this is ya quality and ya delivery coulda been tweaked a lil... overall this was a pretty decent song that flowed from verse to verse nicely... storyline kept it's integrity and didn't jump around from one idea to the next... shyt was straight... get at me for them collabos!!!!!!!!!! |
Ha ha word up IG...i'll get atcha if you on AIM sometime
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Listenin' damn fo real you gotta stop taking these dope legendary tracks man, naww you can't remix summin like this even if its tight..ahh..im only gon keep listenin cos you ma homie..
UNF: Lyrics: You already know these are good, and personal I know man... Emotion: Best in this track, we could feel this.. Articualtion: Naw fam this wasnt great but is yo accent, I dont even know its kina weird but thats all I have against ure track.. Delivery: Good dope LV: Quality: Pretty bad ma, and honestly I aint really feelin yo voice its kinda puttin me off but thats it.. Flow: This was crazy, im def feelin' it.. Delivery: Again hot Emotion: This was lacking a bit too ma..you sound u tryna get thru the verse, its not too bad...and lyrics are nice aids line was a good closer.. 8.2/10 again tho yall shudnt be rippin of legends shit, specially ben fam you did it last track with Bin Laden.. |
Lol word haha i loved the beat...got it off album base so i jus done it :)
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Beat is good
UNF...Is your voice deepening? Flow is good, if not routine. LVera...your vocal quality sounds too muffled and processed compared to UNF's... Through the track off...your voice sounds good tho... Flow is average...delivery could be sharper... Hook sounds decent Not bad...just needs a little polish 1 |
Thanks,is my voic deepening? iunno lol
thanks upppp 1 |
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This is my favorite Lauryn Hill feature... so no complaints on the hooks....
I actually want the beat from u if possible... please Verse one is average at best.. the articulation mesed the flow flow is what made it rough to listen to as far as catching all the lyrics Verse two is the lyrics was coo ... the flow was coo .. but i just didnt like ur cadence for the story ya feel me.. u said u had aids kinda happy... just was weird to me for the tone of the song verse 3 ... better than one .. still had a bit of articulation problem... some of the libs drowned parts of ur verse.... like a second two early so u missed the main part... |
Thanks....upppppppppppppp
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