Yung Wun vs Effect
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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 02:33 PM.
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Yung Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 02:41 PM.
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your writtens are gonna be prewrittens ya brain is missin
I don't think ya should be here cuz you an't gonna be winnin i crush ya bars Retareded fool you always fail to impress leave this battle cuz your mums calling u for some titty sex ya don't even know dat alphabet your a fuckin loser he gets scared when i spit cuz u know im'a abuse yer your a microphone abuser your punches are ur pretection but my raps snap your back and leave ya wid infections this guys a dummy i'll kick ur stummach your a disgrace your a dyslexic you prob can't even tie ur own shoe lace your not gonna spit harder how can u consider yaself an artist im the smartist my flows will kill ya in an instand you retardist im ripping this fool stop skipping school your rap stinks i murder everything you think your the weakest link so step out of line your a faggot your just a coward when you make punchlines dey bounce off me like flowers stupid retard you know my bars stick into leaving you shatterd just like your gf when i had the fuckin bitch battered you an't a rapper your just a dick you can't speak everyone knows ur weak cuz u stand out like a freak your just to damn basic face it your need to wake up you've just gave up im about to blow this fake up your a loose cannon why the hell are you still breathin nobody likes ya man after this you really should be leavin young wun ya sound like ur from hong kong you fag i bet you live in a fuckin gutter wid a binliner bag your rappings wack my skill is just plain better den yours your the whore of rap when ya spit you don't get an aplause |
g'luck kiddo...
Shuttup! AND STAY QUIET, bitch, FUCK A STAGE RIOT, Ill make you 'stay away from the beef' LIKE a SUBWAY DIET! DUCK when I BLAZE PILOTS cuz my GATS BLASTIN KIDS, My 'delivery is so perfect' my 'birth' was CONTRACTIONLESS! You cant HANDLE MY SCRIPTURE so Ima DISMANTLE YA FIGURE, Dominate? Ima destroy ya crew in 1 Shot like a FAMILY PICTURE! So Ima STAB U WIT KNIVES until it becomes a CAPITOL CRIME, Bustin ya 'seed in the ground' is the only way u 'cum-up wit NATURAL RHYMES!' (LMFAO) --Heatin Up-- Im somethin you needa get USED TO or get BRUISED BLUE, Shiit, the 'River' has more 'Natural Flow' than YOU DO! You couldnt elevate wit a MAGICAL CARPET, FAG GO N' PARK IT, Before I smack ya 'body backwards' until ya TRAPPED IN YA CARCASS! Kid, YOULL GET FUCKED, LITERALLY when I PICK UP AGILITY, The ONLY thing your Natural At is ya DICK SUCKIN ABILITY! --FINISH HIM!!-- You gotta GUN & A KNIFE while I got my TONGUE IN YA WIFE, I DIP NUNS CUNTS IN ICE & CUM IN YA EYE- But my Shells 'Make ya Chest Sprint to the Floor' and 'Heart RUN FOR ITS LIFE!' (T-K-FUCKIN-O!) effect fuck ya self dilldo im so strong i could kill you by beaten you with a pillow |
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Voted For: Yung Wun
effect u spittin 2 many lines fam lol.....i had d askimp thru all dat shit i couldn't read da whole thing shit hurtin my eyes... opener-yung takes dis....dat was a good punch and effect ur's was 2 basic structure-umm a tie i could both ya'll shit well punchlines-yung....he had some real creative and cleva shit in his verse...effect i didn't any hott punches from u fam real talk no hate multis-yung...he had 1 almost every line..effect u had nun personals-nun from both ya didn't even say each other's name finisher-yung....dat pillow shit was funny...effect ur's was decent i aint gon lie but it wasn't betta than his v/yung wun RTF..LINKS IN MY SIG...OR CHECK 1 OF MY BATTLES ON DA FRONTLINES |
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Voted For: Yung Wun
Young Wun took this. structure was kinda shitty, but i was feelin this drop big time. punches hit real hard, and were worded good. i didnt really see any hard personals, but i was feelin young wuns verse more. one sided battle to me. I like tha creativite in this one. and you also had more consistency. v/yw |
This was feedback posted for Effect
this verse won because it had a lot more lines and punchlines both battles were pretty close though...
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