" be gone"( nice )(better quality)
 

"Be Gone" (dedication)
i left feed on DAUBZ's track,and on LIMITED EDITIONZ bring,

sounds like ur whisperin


but...ur flow is decent

delivery is lack luster...and sounds like ur mumbling a little

lyrics seem personal...and they rhymed well, if not basic


word on delivery...and don't whisper

and WTF is up with the effect on ur chorus? that is GROSS



6/10


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Your quiet on it like someone was in the house...

flows decent lyrics deep and am feelin em, good shit

Not feelin the hook though man,

overall decent.

lmao chea ! its a love song so i was whispering!yeh and i wanted da rhymein to be like a CONNECT VIBE to LOVE feel me ! but hey
UPPIN... ill RTF on yallz next TRACK!

lets audio battle:)

yea quality is better...good job on that...but the effect on the chorus...lose it...it doesnt sound good...

need to up that delivery...the wispering thing isnt working well with this...

flow is ok...it could be touched up a bit...but not bad...

lyrics are ok...

just keep elevating...work on delivery most...

lmao yo SPEATS set up a battle kid!