technique vs Thoth
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 03-04-25 at 03:55 AM

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Thoth has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-07 07:13 AM.

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-07 07:16 AM.

this guy's been talking to me on msn thinking he runs shit

just cuz ur leading 21-1 I still own ur ass
cuz my rhymin skills top Your souls turned to ash
Thinking ur better den me is all u can say
but id rarther see you cut urself wid ur own razor blade
I know ur gonna be person saying im a dyslexic
but thats comin from nobody thats a dibetic
I got you ticked off Thoth i'll boil u like a broth
u sound better rappin bitch when you do a cough
ya rhymes are cheesy like ur whole personality and shit
but cant u see that im making your mentallity split
and by the way bitch dont write more den my verse
cuz i'll give u a early funeral and burn down ur church
you need ten hours to spit cuz i gather u bein slow
but half of ur shit you say dont have a meanin though
this fags aint bringing heat when he's singing to beats
u'd be more talented at somet else like swinging your feat

francesco says:
k well spit 15 lines k
francesco says:
now i want the battle to be voted on
shane says:
15 lines?
francesco says:
yea plz
shane says:
wow
shane says:
do you even know what a bar is?
francesco says:
yea 2 lines
shane says:
yeah
francesco says:
of coarse m9
francesco says:
m8
shane says:
so why do you have 15 lines
francesco says:
thats 5 bars
shane says:
no it's not
shane says:
5 bars is 10 lines
francesco says:
7 i mean
francesco says:
oops
shane says:
7 bars is 14 lines
francesco says:
81
francesco says:
8
francesco says:
i cant fuckin count
shane says:
8 bars is 16 lines
francesco says:
soz
francesco says:
stop confusing me and spit 15 lines


"francesco says:
i have to do thes exercise were i pat my head and rub my stomak cuz im dyslexic."


"francesco says:Im proly very younger den you"



^^^ things he's said to me on msn.


he's...Not a stan or a herb..more like a quivering mitch..
all elements of rap work for me, techniques just my delivery bitch..
bottom of the barrel, you're nothing, and i'm laughin..
at the fact it would be talkin you up, to say you are a has been..
washed up you're not, you were never grimey to start with..
thought you were gully cause readin' is you're idea of hard BITCH.
no difference, gutter or greasy, this is easy, it's nothin to stomp vets, believe me.
you're dyslexic ass doesn't get the context, PLEASE, GIVE UP ON TEXT COMPLETELY!
you're simple, let's face it...dude says shit like "very younger"
need help interpreting? building or style, my complex is what you get buried under..
this guy's just dumb, never elevated, but has stayed lost, fallin'
i know you're not good at math but you can't escape addition, to your loss column.
because five plus zero equals your record, seven and eighteen.
and my spot heaven gave me was taken..cause i've picked on a retard as of lately..

you know the bitch just made that up so he could get props lol.. Fuckin dick

haha...right dude..........if you keep talking shit you';re gonna get banned for attempting to sway votes

upping for some votes here.................................

Voted For: Thoth

pfft...easy man

"I got you ticked off Thoth i'll boil u like a broth"

...^^..was a REALLY sick line though.....BWAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAHA

this might not count cuz i dont wana break it down but...c'mon man....i mean...c'mon....


Unexplained vote removed

Voted For: Technique

fagggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggfifty fuckin chars cocksmokers

Unexplained vote removed

goodbye to that vote................................

you wrote more lines lol and thanks for the vote. He knew i won it so the vote was honest.

no, the vote was un-explained

un-explained votes = removal

and it doesn't matter if i wrote more lines...the line minimum was 6...thats all that matters


oh yeah....i wrote 14 lines..you wrote 15..


so shut the fuck up

Voted For: Thoth

hahahahahaha.... That reading line.. lmao.. Anyway, Thoth won this by far.

Technique, just keep practicing and you will improve. Your punches are sort of too general or something, they don't really hit hard. You need to think of something that is really offensive to your opponent, and convey it in a way that displays showmanship and confidence on your part.

This was feedback posted for Thoth
 

both ya'll bitches is weak ass hell so fuck this battle