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(1-0) The Dex Vs C-Bo (1-0)
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checkin in.
Good luck CBo bro |
checkin in this bitch.............................
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Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** ...... ...... Sorry bout the explanations but theres mad personals ...... *Got Lloyd BANKS and METHod man in his sig **says "i am wat i say i am" in his sig ***Got lots of rv dollars and he says his overall record is really good ****Red Bull is the leader of the establishment, in which C-Bo is in *****In his profile it says he "smokes rappers like blunts" |
despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double...
i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... |
good verse bro.
good luck............. |
alright good verse by both im gonna drop an honest vote here Dex Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife Dayum i was feelin this..the first line had good wordplay and a good setup..then you hit em hard with the second line..this was a dope effort and it came out great i give this 8.5/10 Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** First line was pretty nice too..i was feelin it..good use of vocabulary and good wordplay and multi's...all tied together nicely 7/10 wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** LOL haha dope shit dawg.i was feelin it..cant see how ur 15-12 ur pretty dope..good setup again...good personal...lol 7/10 Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** blah this was an aiight closer.....wasnt as good as the rest of your shit..could of been better..good use of multi's in the first line...second looked like it was gonna bbe dope then ended blah 6/10 Overall i think this verse is pretty dope....i was feelin it..better then some of the other shit i've seen..good job..you've elevated alot....good wordplay good personals..""good multi's"" 28.5/40 C-BO despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double... i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... blah this was aiight..weak personal and the first line...didnt really word it right so it didnt sound as good as it culd 5.5/10 i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... this was decent...koo flow....didnt have a meaning to it but wat the hell 6/10 so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... There we go you should of did this through the whole battle...dayum this was nice dawg..i was feelin this..mad multi's in this one..and it made sense 9/10 when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... ahh first line was hot..second beginnin part was dope then the end was blah 7/10 overall: this shit was koo you really picked it up at the end..shoulda rapped like that from the start but i think this shit was hot..now let me calculate this.. 27.5/10 DAyum mayn u lost by just a bit vote: dex |
i think dex took this loads of nice mutis thats fitted nice verse and mutis c-bo had some good stuff aswell but not as good and so many dex takes this easy more mutis in the right places that made sense
good job both though v/ dex |
Ok my vote...
------------ Dex Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife The first line made scense but the second left me puzzled...5/10 Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** OK this made more sense...I like tha music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams...lol i know some 1 who shot a video on there eyecam LMAO 8/10 wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** Nice...he might have money....but does he have a record?(shoulda said sum about his bad gfx lol)7.5/10 Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** did you mean he dont smoke blunts? idk...but that was a decent line-7/10 Overall its Ok....decent drop.....i'll give it a 7/10 ------------------------------------------------------------------------ OK now its C-Bo C-BO ----- despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double... i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... Lines are a bit stretched,this is a true line....pretty dope..8/10 i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... Nice multies used here....nuthin too basic......8/10 so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... some of those didn't even rhyme....so this is a ehh bar....4/10 when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... Hmm...a little better..this is a pretty good line...decent right here 7.5/10 Overall the person who was actually "dissing the other person" was Dex...so in my eyes Dex came harder in dissing...so i'm gonna say.... V/DEX |
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Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife OK SINCE THIS IS A MULTIE TURNY ....YOU HAVE NONE LEARN WHAT A MUTLIE IS B-4 THROWN SHYT OUT THERE THE REST OF THE BAR WAS IIGHT, NOTHING HOT--- RATE'N 6/10 BUT SINCE THERE WAS NO MUTLIE = 3 /10 Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** THIS IS FUCK'N HORRIBLE!...I SEE YA PERSONAL I'LL GIVE YOU THAT BUT DAMN NIGGA NO MULTIES--YOU BEARLY RHYMED CUZ METHODS DONT RHYME WITH EYECAMS =SORRY IMMA GIVE THIS A 1 / 10 wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** FOCUS THE NEXT BATTLE ON THE BATTLER, DONT DIRECT IT TO "RED BULL"...CUZ LAST TIME I READ BULL LIKE THAT IT GAVE ME WINGS! 2 / 10 Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** YOU FUCKIN KILLED IT...WHAC WHAC WHAC..0/10 ================================================== ============== ****************C-BO********************* despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double... i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... OK...NICE AT FIRST WITH THE MUTLIES =5/ 10...MOSTLY BECUZ BUDDHA DONT RHYME WITH DOUBLE/...BUT AS FAR AS BATTLE'N THIS WAS THE BEST SO FAR IN THE BATTLE =7/10 i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... NICE'LY RAPPED BUT THIS IS SUPOSED TO BE A BATTLE NOT JUST MULTIES NEXT TIME USE PUNCHES INSTEAD OF "TALKING TRASH" 7/10 so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... NO MUTLIES ---JUST CUZ YOU USE THINGS THAT RHYME ALOT DONT MAKE IT A MUTLIE OVER ALL 4/ 10 when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... OK THAT WAS THE LAST LINE...AND IT SUCKED WORST OF ALL AS FAR AS EVERYTHING ELSE BUT SINCE IT HAD MUTLIES 5/10 PUNCHES:----------C-BO PERSONALS:-------TIE METAPHORS:------DEX WORDPLAY:-------DEX VOCAB:------------C-BO SIMILIES:---------NONE FLOW:-------------C-BO COMPLEXITY:-----TIE WEAKEST LINK---DEX OVERALL: C-BO ADDED COMMENTS....THIS IS NOT TO START BEEF WITH NAN NIGGAS, BUT TO ENHANCE YA BATTLE PERSONA CUZ YALL NIGGAS NEED TO ELEVATE ...OTHERWISE NIGGAS WILL CLOWN THAT ASS---------------------------------- |
despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double...
i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... ^^forced a bit, n not quite multi syllable ryhmes..despite/twice/like/ike, close but these are assonasance rhymes.. i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... ^^1st line had multi's but second was forced n didnt match up so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... ^^no multi's in here, when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... ^^almost again, you need 2 multi's per line, 1st line was ok but ya 2nd fell off right at the end. . no bars were multi syllable rhymes through n through, some single lines had 2 multi's that were proper but fell off in the end of the bars.... you dropped mainly assonasance rhymes man..... . Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife ^^wasnt feelin this at all Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** ^^nope, ya layouts all outta wack dex wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** ^^no, your treating this like a normal battle dawg, weres the vocab n multiple syllable rhyme scheme.???? Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** ^^all assonasance rhymin here,..??... . . well seems you both did the same thing in terms of not pullin off multi's in accordance to the rules...but c-bo had more n seemed to grasp the concept better.... . vote/c-bo, but both need to elevate there multi's alot...pz... . no hate just elevate.... |
3-2 uppin...this is a close battle....
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despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double...
i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha... ****2nd line didnt rhyme...wtf? i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast... he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast... ***better bar, decent multis so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation... wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation... ****i like it but it feels kinda forced when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary... your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary... ***ok closer prolly the best in ya verse Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife ****not feeling this bar.....ur better dan that Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods* “I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams ** ****decent come back but the last multi was iffy wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record*** Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled**** *****not really multis but dope fucking set up Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”***** ****no not really but the 2nd to last line was enuff for the vic vote dex |
4-2 Uppin this..............
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