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NYC 09-13-07 01:04 PM

The English Lesson, Pt.1
 
Yo....

The following lesson is a select selection/
Of verbal vernacular spectacular, verbal herbal garlic keeps you back like Dracula/
No reflections, just dissections of urgent insurgentsies/
To burgle insurancees, wack cat turtles when he's seized/
Disdydococonesia mixed with pneumonia and amnesia/
Reverse oscillation of nuclear stations end up freezin' ya/
The acceleration of microbe particles and ions and protons/
and neutrons for radiowaves to boost on/
Teutonic vibrations with vociferous warnings/
The smell of coniferous trees mixed with the morning/
Periodical table of elements turn hesitant/
And my spectral presence suggests I'm heaven sent/
My microphone static is so idiosyncratic/
With syntax that juxtaposes when you look at it/
The story's mandatory for personal glory/
Could you cue up some subterranean Mediterranean for me?/
I'll reciprocate, but only if I gotta/
Accutely accurate due to the enlarged Medula Oblongata/
The spoken reunification leads to revelations/
That cyphers couldn't solve without reverberations/
Raps start to sound somewhat erroneous/
While MC's get vexed and act sanctimonious/
The intense choreograph makes it simulcast/
Use graphite or unrefined dye when I sign your cast/
Unanimity is unusually heard without undenomination/
Understanding is understaffed with too low an undervaluation/
Benzine flows that smoulder slow like a cigarette/
Interfere with the mind's temple in the form of a ziggurat/
If you don't comprehend these words then I suggest you study your text/
You'll be positively dispensed if you think you can pass this English Test/
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Aight...if some of this doesn't make sense, don't try and call me on it, K? I didn't use no dictionaries/Thesaurus for this shit...It's my vocab skillz alone, so give me a break!

KM 09-13-07 08:53 PM

ehhh im not really feelin this...i like the vocab and all and i understand the concept u were tryin to come with....but it all seemed forced it wasn't a smooth read....if this was like a keystyle i would say take some of those vocab words out cause its really not needed...i like how u tryin to be creative though bring something different....keep doing what u do though just my opinion....7/10 ~1~

NYC 09-14-07 02:45 AM

Word up, I hear ya homey. I was on some Canibus shit, just smoked a blunt and was listening to "Poet Laureate Infinity", lol. You right tho, it was forced.

Peace

Also Known. 10-05-07 04:41 AM

Try sayin that three times fast

10-11-07 12:36 PM

You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.

10-14-07 06:32 AM

Closed, Moved And Stored.


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