-NERVEZ- vs A.M.O.K
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 10

Check in by: 07-29-04 at 08:56 PM

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-NERVEZ- has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 07:27 PM.

A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 08:00 PM.

Your gay, homosexual... dayum I'm tryin to search for wordz
Print your name on my penis... watch him try & GET ON MY NERVEZ!,
What is worst?Fake gangsters or them tryin to be bold
YOUR 21.... yet you have the vocabulary of a 12 year old,
Just a little 'ass hole' sort of like a baby donkey's grave
Enclose your head in a box mahfucka & rattle your brain,
Your lines are lame, claim block corners where you drop rhymes?
Lies, only place you rap is.... ...on the coner of your mind,
Test mine?I flow nice, my punchlines a sure winners
Went & stepped on the plate & I ate your ass fo dinner,
Could simplify my lines, so you could grasp what I say
But I only want your eyes to catch bullets I spray,
Could talk bitches all day, they crowd my house
While only 'hoes' you've seen are joined to a valve,
Oh well, should of put a limit on lines, 16, no more
Cause you 'run out of bars' like when you see brawls

Hoo Hum

Getting your prewritten ready?

I'm sure it'll be some hot shit

VOTE..VOTE..VOTE..........VOTE..........VOTE

Heres is battle against a bitch who dont dont make sense when she Rap]
Preachin like she A. M.inister O.n K.rack]

Make up your mind bitch you either hood or u Burbs][Suburbs]
Fabricate your rhymes cuz yo ghetto stripes are Ubsurd]

I strike every nerve until she fails at accomplishin any Goals]
And refer to dis cat like a female because he a Hoe]

Dick tucked when he flow like he tryin to make a statement]
These bullets faceplant on his dome and then straight to da basement]

Is where youll be buried, gone in a hurry,call it my rap cemetary]
I spit lyrics in flurries, spirits skurry, thats why this bitch gettin worried]

Your names a riddle,A. M.idjet O.nly K.rew?]
If dis bitch only knew how hell be shun from da ghetto Fool]

you see u should get yo head out da clouds and be currency Chasin]
Instead of tryin to be a gansta, cuz frum da look of things u aint gonna Make It]

My automatics will let u have it when im dishin out Havoc]
admit u panickd cuz u damaged when i took Advantage]

Of this battle and left this rookie breathin in Dirt]
So da next time he touch a keyboard hell be scared n disturbed.............................

P L E A S E V O T E-

koo koo now we need da votes.................
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Voted For: -NERVEZ-

ima have to give this battle to nervez even tho it was pretty close but his punches flowed better holla at me wit honest votes, return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137900
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874

Gay vote,

I'll vote on your battle when you explain your vote better.

more votes............................................. ....

*yawn* Vote like you care, c'mon you can do it!!!!

Voted For: A.M.O.K

Who eva dis is got thos 1 i liked ya Structure Flow Great Wordplay and For the Challanger u had Bad Structure and Flow was Iight

But i think th 1 wit better Punchlines Win and i think he got this so nice shit home i liked it Great battle but this 1 comes away wit it

P.S....


You should come tryout for

! StRiKlY HooD !

Vote, I'm dope, I'll slide on a slope & put a knife in your throat

Voted For: A.M.O.K

haha AMOK, a lot better than the previous battle i voted on of yours...better structure and flow, nice punches...no good personals..ok wordplay, could of been better..but not bad

Nerves-also very nice, good punches, structure a little off at times, ok flow, a couple of personals, not very good but you tried...wordplay was blah...overall nice drop but this one goes to AMOK...

return the favor link in sig, thanks

AMOK, go to the bottom of the main forum list and report this as a bad vote, it'll get DQd and you wont have to worry bout it