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East Miles vs. PinkPanther
Bang Bang Bang!!!!!!!!!! The Champ is here!!!!!!
aight man 5 barz....1hr limit to post or I'll close it....capish :laugh: |
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my bad...........
didnt see it.............. CHECK. |
Rappin bitch? When my gatz are lit they torch and melt plastic kids
Flap ya lips, You couldnt be 'cap ME bitch' if you were tappin Shift! Massive hits, Crack ya ribs and split intestines, I'm the reason u fearin Told you your punches hittin average, So you swung at your reflection in mirrors Blessin this queer kid, Ya career clickin? Naw I"m hittin Back to get out And dog, shoot yaself in the foot......While the gunz still in ya mouth! Pink bitchin him out, You at high standards? HA! i stop and cough Cuz you'll be at a high standard........When I drop You OFF! Swing lockness claws to drop ya jaw, And bruised til East starts to bleed blue some kats just too hard headed.......but I think East just got a clue........... |
hurry up and post your shit.......................
it dont take 3 hours to key up 5 bars................... |
Okay check 1 2...............
Look Kidd...... East is a beast, pop the trunk...... and strap the heat....Miles a str8 shatter ya teeth.....So panther give it a rest,... every Bar was weak Nigga act like he got straps.....Shut ya mouth and just rap......Cuz I move packs, gun powder eat through ya skin when I cockback.......Miles lay the lines on your Heart monitor Flat..... This kidd alwayz talkin mo greasier....dump him in Lake Michigan so the bitch can catch fish easier..... Fucken Wussy....the only reason Pink is in ya name because you prolly look, smell, and act like a pussy.... I get cash (pause) sitt on Dubbz and Daytonz.......Put work in (pause) with them snubbz and gloves like my name was Payton.....This nigga is a fag he ain't no gangsta...Give him 9 shots from the 50 cal cause this bitch mafucka's a wanksta....March 2 Miles anthem...I take part of you fucken face like the Oprea Phantom Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Strutcure: pink
Flow: pink Punches: Mile Personals: Mile Enjoyed: Mile Vote: Mile |
uppin in this peace..........................................,,, ,,,,,,,,,.
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Pink: Good Structure, good flow, The punches were hittin to some extent. Try and use a lil more personal and word play next time though.
Miles: The flow was SYCK, structure was a lil off. Punches were hittin awesome, nice job of multiples I liked that. You praise yourself a lil much take that out and put punches in the place and it would hit even harder. Over it was pretty syck though. V/ Miles You two please hit his battle up: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132541 |
Rappin bitch? When my gatz are lit they torch and melt plastic kids
Flap ya lips, You couldnt be 'cap ME bitch' if you were tappin Shift! Nice opener..well done..creative..7/10 Massive hits, Crack ya ribs and split intestines, I'm the reason u fearin Told you your punches hittin average, So you swung at your reflection in mirrors Didn't rhyme..weak line..3/10 Blessin this queer kid, Ya career clickin? Naw I"m hittin Back to get out And dog, shoot yaself in the foot......While the gunz still in ya mouth! I'm lookin for punches..nothing special. 4/10 Pink bitchin him out, You at high standards? HA! i stop and cough Cuz you'll be at a high standard........When I drop You OFF! A little simplistic..but a punch..it was iight 5/10 Swing lockness claws to drop ya jaw, And bruised til East starts to bleed blue some kats just too hard headed.......but I think East just got a clue........... Ummm..nothing new...5/10 advice: u need to 'elevate' more..work on your punches and voabulary.. averaged: 4.8.... Well, it took you a while to juss spit 5 bars Miles...over 3 hours? whew... East is a beast, pop the trunk...... and strap the heat....Miles a str8 shatter ya teeth.....So panther give it a rest,... every Bar was weak Not a good opener for you..panther had better 5/10 Nigga act like he got straps.....Shut ya mouth and just rap......Cuz I move packs, gun powder eat through ya skin when I cockback.......Miles lay the lines on your Heart monitor Flat..... Ehh..nuttin' really..just bein' hood on dis one..no punch 5/10 This kidd alwayz talkin mo greasier....dump him in Lake Michigan so the bitch can catch fish easier..... Aight, aiight..here we go a punch..lol..is iight 6/10 Fucken Wussy....the only reason Pink is in ya name because you prolly look, smell, and act like a pussy.... didn't flow well..good personall..nottin' 'wow' bout it 5/10 I get cash (pause) sitt on Dubbz and Daytonz.......Put work in (pause) with them snubbz and gloves like my name was Payton.....This nigga is a fag he ain't no gangsta...Give him 9 shots from the 50 cal cause this bitch mafucka's a wanksta....March 2 Miles anthem...I take part of you fucken face like the Oprea Phantom lol..u see all the other bars..and you see this whole fuckin paragraph..lol is all good the punches were pretty weak but i give u props of at least droppin some 5/10 u need to try to flow better and make your punches better aswell... averaged: 5.2 vote-East Miles ---------------------------------------- umm...can ya'll both vote on my current battle..i needa end this battle and get it ova wit..please return the favor cuz i took a lotta time to work on this battle and judge it..vote honestly and professionaly 1. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100 |
dogg........uppin..........................no body voted shit man I supposed to have three....................................
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aight this was a pretty tight battle.. both of yall need to keep elevatin, i liked both of yalls rhymes but East came harder with the punches and personals and had better structure.. no hate tho, thats just what i think.... good battle fo sho..
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East had harde hitting pucnhes he had decent struture pink you need a elavate
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