**Couragous Spitz**
i dunno what i was on when i wrote this (but it wasn't drugs) lol
Through out history, mans great mystery From continent to continent A recipe for hypocrisy A multitude of killin The worlds biggest villain Continuously fed ignorance and blood spillin// Kill more people than AIDS~And more people than raid In combat by troops with explosive hand grenades So people hold poisonous snakes in his name So people like to concentrate and self inflict pain// Emaculation brought on decapitation Situations unbearable for human habitation Devastation rain from nation to nation A fool with a cause equals self-defecation// Blind to the facts when reality attacks Just turn your back, mumble some words then relax Proud of what you say? But you act a different way Keep on judging others and your pain will go away// Raise your children wrong with exception strong And they'll walk a crooked path difficult and long// To declare it and understand incoherent Leaves a person the weakness despite transparent Take a look around you not just in the front Watch ya pockets real close and beware of a skun// All the dark secrets built up for a while Can be hidden on Sunday with a suit and a smile In the past, nothing stood in its path Even women and children felt the wrath of the bloodbath Believe what I believe or face death If you disagree then you'll have no face left That was a sentence; ultimate and it was repentant Become a mortar and be buried in the trenches The same tradition that's carried on today But instead of blades swinging, bullets ricochet Anti abortion advocates throw pipe bombs While the ignorant gather to worship icons No independent thought; sanctity bought At the price of a life and they thankfully fought Robots in the light, programmed to recite Words that'll make the dog night run in fright This thing is very dangerous when in the wrong minds And evidence finds that this shit easily blinds In the human existince, take death for instance The topic of discussion can shorten the distance Be careful of the food you bite And when digestin it, keep your own thoughts in sight Puppets move by a common thread Never taken the time to let thought in the head Instead, eatin all the bullshit they fed Thats why nintey-percent of the world is mentally dead* some shyt on my dame ya feel... i replied to rule (weather art) B.I. (Nuclear Concepts) Mental God (Historical moments) |
This was dope
I liked the vocab in the first line(Or attempt at it) You need to lengthen your bars a little Flow was there mos def Nice topic 1 |
YEAH DUNNY THANX... i'm just tryin to see what style i should work out with ... i like this style of keystylin... but i like my other style better... but thanx yo
UPPIN |
Plz return the favor on my piece
"What Has Happened To HipHop" |
This was pretty good, It was fun to read cause your topics were everywhere LOL. Flow fell off a couple times, But im feeling this hommie. Nice Drop...
UPPIN OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
Yeah this was a alright piece here....structure seemed pretty good in this i thought, could be touched up a bit here and there though....but your vocab was pretty nice in this also....flow was alright, fell off at some points in this though....but overall a alright drop here...keep at it.
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THANX YALL... i'mjust tryin to keep elevating...
UPPIN Caesar on3 |
i like it even tho u seemed to go off on weird subjets it was still good
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i liked the topic the flow was real hard to follow for me though needeed more internals and multis in my opinion. but the detail was good and in depth
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thanx yall... showin the love... UPPIN
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this all the love i get???......................................iight. ..
Caesar on3 |
I see you have done a lot of elevatin since me and u battled. Nice shit u got here man. I'll give ya ur rematch soon. Ive been busy producin. But otha than that, Nice work MD. Peace.
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Through out history, mans great mystery
From continent to continent A recipe for hypocrisy /\did not rhyme flow fell off a lot...choppy vocabulary seemed forced at times... long read that bored me a lot make them shorter metaphors you must improve overall...ok drop i guess |
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punch to the gut But thanx yall.... mo love.. uppin |
uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.... i want this to make 2 pages
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