MaRVJay1009 vs Marvelis
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
3 votes=ko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


only explained votes!....no hatin pleez

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-23-05 at 03:36 PM

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Marvelis has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 01:45 PM.

niggas talk shit to a 16 year "old"/i'll open up ya whole life and then bring it to a "close"/cuz my flows smoke like a cigar "hit" ima keep pumpin nigga till it go "click-click"/this is "sick-shit" so i got to put my name "in it"/they call me marvelis and i have to "say" that on this text battle im killin a nigga they call "marv-jay"/im in tha dirty "south" where u would fit in cuz u got a dirty "mouth"/when u read this u definately gon b sayin "ouch"/u betta watch ya "mouth" b4 i end uup in ya home town all up in ya "house"/im a crazy nigga wit a real itch trigga finga/

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 02:06 PM.

like "fans spendin da nite 4 world series tickets" i "sleep on ya lines".
whut b on ya mind?,u wack only "feed-back" u'll get is some "teeth on ya spine".
u should run & hide,fam fukk ya pride,my slugz a push ya lung a side.
should be ashamed of ya self u 5-8 doin audio's & textin your 1-5.
da type get smack n run 2 da feds,he broke i doubt dis fukka get bread.
u a pre writa..not i my bar's like where u "live" they come "from:da head"*
on foe's-i-bang,trust me my flows-not-lame,i see dis hoe's-not-sane.
you dont rap shit like me fam u just a dickhead dat stole my name!.
with guns im real handy b,u gon merk sombody? well it cant be me.
i'll squeeze at ya face just 2 see ya marvelis "leave" his "family tree".


*he's from a place called "da head"..so u'll get it

okay uppin 4 some votes now

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

WOOOOOOOOW Rofl


Vote=Marv

Marvelis i dont think even had a punch in his whole verse .. it was like a selfless ramble .. marvelis you need to elevate look more at his name flip it or something ...............

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

matv won dis battle becuz his verse wuz much mo tighter he had da better punchez an his verse flowd an made sense marvelis verse wuz all fukked up wit da horrible structure da shit wuz unreadable

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

hmmm.
this was one sided, marvelis ya sructure is fucked, thats a no-no, u should hve ya struc like marv j¬s..wouldnt b a prob if ya content was good but it wasnt.none of ya lines ruymed..which the way u structured it they din hve to but on rv it matters.n e way u had no punches.ya rhymes were all self-glory..which is pointless, the whole point of a battle is to diss ya opponent which u failed to do..only gud thing u had was flow & multies, but this matters nothin without personals and punches.

marv j came aiight..noothin special...he did enough because he beat marvelis with harder punches which is the most important thing.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This battle goes in favor of marvjay1009

Marvjay
had better Structure.His punches hit better than marvelis's. His personals were good i liked them a lot.To me his best line was:
u should run & hide,fam fukk ya pride,my slugz a push ya lung a side.
should be ashamed of ya self u 5-8 doin audio's & textin your 1-5.


Marvelis
dropped pretty weak.His structure fucked everything up.
His punches were decent but if they were structured better then he would get more credit from me in dis battle.Personals were decent also.


Overall vote - Marvjay1009

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

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Marvjay
Not Stressin Yourslef to win this battle i can see .....You basically supplied A few punchez to his NO Punchez made your verse that much more better lol i feel that you take this battle basically bcuz your verse was better andy dood could see that and plus you roppenents structure was jus ........Wack and im not even gonna start on his verse so plainly and simply told ,,,,,..You win this battle

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Marvelis
Aii man Your verse was sloppy To start off sayin I couldnt really read it bcuz your lines were jus like a regular paragraoh and the shit was all over the place so when i really did read it Your lines didnt come with any punchez jus basic diss lines that i here people say daily so im not givin you my vote
But You can
RTF i my Battles Honestly