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Recluse 07-18-04 04:00 PM

TRIGGA.:vrs:.Almighty
 
10-16 linez
no/hate/dr/crew/unexplained votes
verses due 24 hours after checkin in
you spit first

good luck

Recluse 07-18-04 04:13 PM

checkin in

Almighty 07-18-04 04:36 PM

I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yoshitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situationthere are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty

Recluse 07-18-04 05:06 PM

kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//

Almighty 07-18-04 05:18 PM

nice battle now can we plz get some people to vote!!!!

uzi 07-18-04 06:48 PM

pretty good battle... almighty....you need to elevate alot....Trigga you could of came way harder then this.. i've seen you do way better and so has everybody else but trigga got the best of this battle
v/trigga

Desipher 07-18-04 06:51 PM

vote on da prodigy vs slugga and da prodigy vs mixed toxinz and i'll vote on this or anything else

Almighty 07-18-04 11:44 PM

what do u mean elevate can u plz tell me how 2 becuz im jus tryin 2 become a better mc!!!

Recluse 07-19-04 10:59 PM

uppin for more votes....on this weak ass battle...i came so shitty...i was fucking lazy

Yung Sage 07-19-04 11:02 PM

Both of u are garbage enuff said from da Yung Sage!

T West 07-19-04 11:05 PM

Almighty
I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yoshitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//
^weak...

now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //
^weak...

these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//
^weak...

this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//
^ok...this is just stupid...

if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situationthere are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//
^ugh...

trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//
^this is a pathetic verse...

knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty
^fuckin horrible...


TRIGGA MATRIX
kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
^no...

wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
^atleast ders a attempt at good wordplay...

if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
^weak...

this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
^weak...

well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//
^weak...you rhymed the same words...even weaker

Overall:...Almighty...holler at one of the better cats to help you out so you can elevate quicker...Trigga tooks this hands down.

Return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to vote on urs...you can take the time to vote on mine.

mC RIOT 07-19-04 11:17 PM

aight this battle was pretty damn weak. Almighty, u need to get better u pretty good but work on your structure (it was hard to follow) and add some personals in there and u'll be fine, i was feelin some of your punches.
Trigga, damn man what happened? I clicked on this battle just cuz I saw your name cuz I thought it would be hot like usual but u didnt bring it as much as u usually do. But I was still feelin your shit to da fullest I liked dat line about dangle his eyeballz dat shit was funny and dope haha.
vote: TRIGGA MATRIX

DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON DA BATTLE BELOW!!!

schema 07-19-04 11:22 PM

Almighty

I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yo shitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//
->>i can already tell your biggest problems are structure and flow...this was a dope idea but keep it 12-15 syllables this is like at least 2 lines

now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //
->>way stretched but cool concept

these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//
->>stretched

this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//
->>filler

if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situation there are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//
->>gay talk is played unless its creative

trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//
->>wasnt feelin it

knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty
->>theres books shorter than this



Trigga Matrix

kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
->>pretty cool i thought

wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
->>ok

if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
->>second line stretched bad

this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
->>generic

well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//
->>weak closer


Almighty I can really see that verse as being sick if it flowed so I hate to give Trigga the vote but I have to...I cant vote for a verse that has no flow or structure. I think when you elevate and get your lines right well be seeing osme good stuff from you but youre not there yet.

v/Trigga Matrix

\/hit me up \/

Recluse 07-20-04 10:59 AM

i know this was a weak ass battle but you guys seen be merk people....i just was lazy..............uppin for more votes

GrEnAdE 07-21-04 05:19 AM

Ok
 
Almighty
I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yoshitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//
^MULTIES...but horrible punch

now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //
^i get it,but it woz weak...wrk on set-up

these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//
^gay lines,dnt use them...nobody votes on em no more,unless they real original

this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//
^wtf?..thats horrible

if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situationthere are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//
^ugh...gay

trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//
^aiight concept..setup spoils it again...but gunz are another no-no,unless its original

knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty
^self glorification.another n0-no

TRIGGA MATRIX
kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
^decent wordplay,weak punch

wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
^the best bar of the battle...n it woz aiight.. 6/10

if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
^weak coz it aint personal ...bad concept

this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
^weak...gay line..ok multi,wordplay...

well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//
^wudve bin gud,i like how u used gunit......but u rhymed the same words n structure woz fucked...decent flow


ALMIGHTY-u need to stop with gay lines,guns and self-glorification..
there played n wnt win u votes...other than that your flow n structures good but u need punches that are creative n make sense.....personals are best to rip on....also u need setup your punches so the second line hits coz it goes wit tha first.

TRIGGA-ive noticed u hve good rhyming and flow...
but again your punches were weak..that basement line it dosent hit ur opponent.i think u need to use personals....n think b4 u type.try get sum sicker concept 4 ur punches

overall////TRIGGA...punches were better,even though they wernt hot


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