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Rappad 01-09-04 09:25 PM

$pitacular v.s. Rappad(300+ to vote)
 
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blind drop, due in 10 minutes.
no need to check in, just drop your verse.
300+ posts to vote.

Rappad 01-09-04 09:37 PM

Don't get somethng? ask me or don't vote
*-Think!
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Spit's been through many battles, now this kid's met his match
I dispatch a sick illness...he obviously can't catch*
You seem scared, ur verses? always with explanation parts
Cuz you always leave the point under the lines, like exclamation marks!
Ya only beat newbs, ya future ain't bright cuz you seeing dark
When even if ya wipe ya ass your shit still won't leave a mark
I'll lend you some time, to start mending ya rhymes
Cuz the only rippin you do is having slashes at the end of ya lines
Gonna knock him down in this bout, kid never stood a chance
Little things win battles, 'cept when you pull down your pants
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good luck

$pitacular 01-09-04 09:44 PM

aight yo, blind spit:

I see you researched and locked... the formula to be a fag
I'll make ya Homo-less... straight evicted from your Rap-Pad
you thought you made Hits... cuz you always stay "Whack!"
with a Record like that... you'd be better off with 8 tracks
face facts... your more of a Waist then a fat man's Stomach
you must go with ya Gut feelin... cuz you always Spit Vomit
My dick... you're On it... not just ridin it, you fuckin Humpin
In beef you just like Paris Hilton... Famous for doin Nothin
you so damn shook... you look away from your own Mirror
The day of your birth... was the dawn of a new Error

blah keyed

$pitacular 01-09-04 09:55 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. ................

IceMan187 01-09-04 10:02 PM

"I'll make ya Homo-less... straight evicted from your Rap-Pad"

that was just fuckin corny i think that one cost you the battle

any way spitacular does most certainly not spit- tacular at all
i heard better shit from bangin trash can lids
rappad had better punches and his stuff made sense yours on the other hand made as much sense as lida dees matrix sig from corrupted visions

IceMan187 01-09-04 10:03 PM

i cant vote tho .................................................. .............................. ;(

WORD~PERFECT 01-09-04 10:03 PM

i think spictacular took this though both hit hardcore with rhymes
rapped didnt bite but you can tell his punches were influenced by several similarities:
Cuz the only rippin you do is having slashes at the end of ya lines

Cuz you always leave the point under the lines, like exclamation marks!

these 2 were influenced from another plus one is an irrelovent diss. i read his work the point is simply explained in rhyme......sound a lil copywrite 78 type.

not accusing anything cause....
The day of your birth... was the dawn of a new Error
also seams copywrite style.

but all and all my vote goes to SPIC

$pitacular 01-09-04 10:04 PM

Iceman shut the fuck up... you the biggest herb on the site LOL


uppin for 300+ voters (dumbass ice LOL)


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Decimal 01-09-04 10:05 PM

Spictacular took this,.....Flow wuz both Even.....Structure wuz preety Even....Sipctacular had harder punches,Wordplay, and Personals....

Tight battle
Vote~Spictacular

Rappad 01-09-04 10:06 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by strobe
Effective immediately, if you are going to vote, you must drop a real vote with an explanation. If we see something like:

open: xxxx
close: xxxx
personals: xxxx
metas: xxxx
punches: xxxx
multis: xxxx

win: xxxx

Your vote WILL BE DISQUALIFIED and any links to your active battles WILL BE REMOVED. Do not waste our and your time posting a non-original vote.

Whats a good vote? We don't expect you to write a novel, but a decent sentence or two containing personalized feedback will be adequate. Basically hit what were the good points for the winner and bad points for the loser. That way both opponents will be able to figure out how they can improve.


^please follow

Token 01-09-04 10:07 PM

Hmm..

Close battle both of you have elevated.

Rappad
Your verse was good. But you need to be more witty. Most of your metaphors were pretty played. Vocab was simple... Nice structure. Overall your verse was alright.

Spitacular
Your verse was definetly elevated. You had the wit.. the punches and the metaphors. Everything connected well. Although the flow could have been a bit better and some of the lines could have been re worded for better effect. Overall your verse was better than alright.. Dope.

Rappads verse was dope too but Spit took this one in my opinion.
Great battle.

Rappad 01-09-04 10:07 PM

also, if under 300 posts, do not sway in here either, that includes decimal and ice....
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Decimal 01-09-04 10:08 PM

O mybad dawgs,.... I fogot i don't got 300 Posts Mybad............................................. .........................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105151

^^hit it up wit an honest vote if u could please

thanks

Rappad 01-10-04 11:16 AM

rise

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GaZeeBo 01-10-04 11:21 AM

aight actually i think that rappad won this for better punches and personals

his flow was better i thought and i also thought that his verse was better overally

also i loved this line
You seem scared, ur verses? always with explanation parts
Cuz you always leave the point under the lines, like exclamation marks!

im still laughin over that

i think rappad had the better verse and he gets my vote

great battle- no hate

my vote-rappad

hit up the battles in the sig
just copy and paste them


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