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.:LiKe WhOoA...wHo SaId ¤ÐÅž¤ CaN't FlOw:.
Yo first………..Whenever I converse something spectacular occurs afterwards, ……….And the fan's concur daz’s spitten deserves the descriptional word-superb, Its clever the way I play on word's, As I conjugate n relate adjective's, noun's, and verb's, Daz’ll be everlasting for sure Just observe the sentence structure of my grammar, Or literature not only meets…but exceeds the standards, The end crowns the work, Grandeur slurs I deserve, From the endless efforts and always expressing concern, All the countless measures I take to insure, Each verse's better than the last you heard, In otherwards rest assure I'm the best for sure, Believe it or not because it is absurd, I'm disturbed like the next door neighbors in the movie The Burb's,blaintent Blasephemer, Who'll trap your pastor inside of a herse, swerve n crash into your family's church, While he suffers from 3th degree burns, Ax muderer type massacres will occur if we bash word's, Rapper's are perturbed and say ¤ÐÅž¤ you got some nerve, To just blirt out you're the best on earth, Fuck it maybe even in the entire universe.. ........ ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. . |
damn man really nice flow.....good useage of multis and vocab liked it a lot man....9/10
return the feed on my OM's and this one http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161571 peace~1 |
hot shit right there...nice rhymes good flow..but you limited ya self by only rhyming one word..still hot peep mines the hit em up...8.5/10
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thanx 4 da feed yo<>uppin.....
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This was a tight flow, But some of them things u said make u look conceded man, But overall Nice ass flow.....9/10
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lmao, ya i see how you can feel that... i wrote it as a self glorification piece... never done it b4...sooo i thjought id try it... thanx fo the feedback.... |
dope verse fam i was feeling all the wordplay got tongue tied a couple of times though lol.. should collab sometime 9/10
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wow. I don't read text much cause I'd rather listen to the audio, but this was real nice man. Good looks. I dunno how you gon spit this - it's almost too much, but for a lyrical written - it's hot. Cat's better not sleep - this is one hot jam. Try and get away from mentionin your name so much, and just let them know you're talkin bout you. They know already - just speak it man. Nice drop.
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tongue twisters sound nice on audio.. i would seriously consider puttin' this to audio.. it's really nice..
All the countless measures I take to insure, Each verse's better than the last you heard, In otherwards rest assure I'm the best for sure, Believe it or not because it is absurd, I'm disturbed like the next door neighbors in the movie The Burb's,blaintent Blasephemer, Who'll trap your pastor inside of a herse, swerve n crash into your family's church, While he suffers from 3th degree burns, ^all that up there was real creative, very nice fa real... good luck with this.. :thumbup: |
Why you haven't been nominated yet i'll never know...but this was most def a dope piece...the rhyming was off the chart you def got skillz at writing shit flowed was a lil stetched but flow made up for that wordplay dayum to put it simple was dope...i'd give this an 8/10 this was most def a good piece keep droppin bombs :thumbup:
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DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this piece fire.flow was outrageous.good drop.9.5/10.keep em comin'
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uppin this for feed yo.................!
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Yo this was hot man
It Was almost as good as my shit ;) almost the flow and vocab wasn't too much nor too little.. so you get a 10/10...I got 11's...spfff *finishes hating on you* -Indeph |
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