accomplishment vs. valor
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Check in maine.......

in....

no chances the way this kids late we should up-the-stakes and
let this bitch feel what its like to have breath depravation
hard to sleep, verses causin opposites of some good dreams
runs in da family, so fubu pants only way you got hood jeans
you winnen, battle me and lose kid thats whats expectided
like rabid dogs, in uptown apartmants, known to wreck shit
this fag screamin he had enough, so i bring more to ya
fuckin homo blows harder than country-wide orchestras


didnt feel like spitten alot

This Cats Gay Worry's More Of Having A Ja'rule Body..
He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?..(sig)
Your Rymes Cant Make Sinse Even If Your Verse Was Done..
Ur Wack,and Have Me Saying I Have 99 Problems But This Bitch Aint One..
He Comes With Weak And Shitty Rhymes And Thinks Hes Authentik..
Ur Rymes Aint Intelligent,so The Crew A.I Are You In It..
He Didn't Feel Like Spitting Alot,dude's Going To Pay The Cost..
So Go Back And Tell Your Crew How You Spit 8 Herbish Lines And Lost..

Blah

Didn.t Feel Like Spittin Alot...rofl

accomplish ment is in my crew.. however im voting against him...
accomplishment
you didnt come hard at all, you used some shit lines such ass:
no chances the way this kids late we should up-the-stakes and
let this bitch feel what its like to have breath depravation
Bad opener^ your whole verse had choppy flow..
overall 6.4/10

valor....
you had bad structure good* flow
you used a bad line... however you flipped it and used good wordplay on
the second line:This Cats Gay Worry's More Of Having A Ja'rule Body..
He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?.
^^ you put in that personal you came harder so in my book you won
ovrall.. 7.0/10
my vote valor for just coming harder and throwing muh more personals and punches
v/valor

accomplish ment is in my crew but im voing against him

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:flow was working nothing too complex but solid 7/10

volcab:average nothing really to say 5.5/10

puncheS:some alright lines nothing too direct though not the best i've seen from you 6/10

overall:18.5/30

breakdown for valor:

flow:alright nothing better then accomp 7/10

volcab:average array 6.5/10

punches:a couple of lines that were more direct still nothing too special though my fav,"He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?..(sig)" i give 6/10

overall:19.5/30 pretty close

vote--valor good battle though

LOL.........vote accomp for not feeding. I could have swore that was one of your rules dirt. Why is there no DQ?

Agreed git that shit poppin, i'ma pull a l.i. on di sbitch