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In Respect
For Harry....much more than an uncle
I hav'nt cried since I found out you had died That was the last time tears fell from my eyes Took me by suprise, never thought you'd leave I miss you, like a lung you helped me breath And I believe you watch over me from heaven You were there for me since my birth in 1987 My veins are severed but I'm still here, alive I dont see you no more but memories survive Your health nose-dived so now you dont suffer You were my heart beat, there wont be no other Now all I got is my brothers, they are the world I love 'em so much.....much more than any girl In life's twists+turns, I'm under cloudy skies But it's OK, coz we'll meet again on the day I die So in my rhymes I expose my heart and my soul I know your proud as I chase my personal goals The blackholes in society are tryn'a to suck me in But you protect me, from deep under my skin All my sins come out from underneath my flesh It must be all my fears which are bein addressed Coz since your death, my life aint been the same Now I got nothin to lose...but everythin to gain Rest in Peace......I miss you |
Dope.....very enotional..was this from recent tragedy??? Is..I'm truly sorry..
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Think this is very touching, makes me think about all the relatives i've lost...am moved...
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No....he died in 2002. But I've got family problems so it's bringin it all back to me. Thanks tho |
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there is no way you are 16 with such great lines.I like your bridges, I like your the way you end your lines and I like your imagery...you ain't 16, stop lying boy. You like 25 and you act like you ain't got skills but you do. I hate reading but I'll read anything from you
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Lm a really nice emotional piece. I recently lost my gamps and my uncle and i'm gettin where your comming from! great flow and structure. peace man!! (R.I.P)
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I'm definatly 16.....thanks anyway. Thanks for all the feedback so far |
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this was pretty dope,
i liked the flow and ity had tons of emotion props this was extremly deep which makes you think i was feeling this, is this the same LM from lw that i battled before?? |
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