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Oc lotto v ben hated
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imma respond in like 10 ai you cool wit dat??????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????.............................. ......
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Ben hated walk around wit your lens shaded/you think you good dont let them rate it!!/you get rejected from a thousand whores/and thats not the end there still one thousand more!!/you get match box matches they dont count/even if you had a calculator it still wont count!/i can see clear through you like poland springs/i know what chu gonna say moms pops me bein so gay/
stop it ya rhymes are know i got puch lines that knock you in a diffrent time zone/stop it the topic change i blow up your stnds you realy wanna battle pussy THROW UP YA HANDS!!/ |
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even tho we both winless, it's nuts to go against me...
like a half bag of 'weed seeds' you don't make sense see{sensi}.. i'ma verbal vampire who feeds off bitin-a-verse... but it seems ya lack of 'flow' will have me dyin-of-thirst.. spittin with those skillz you won't get far son... i tell jokes on websites, mafukka you are one... you earn no winnings, drop the Oc from tha lotto.. being wack is ya motto,you 'ill' cause of snot ho.. 'thanks'for'giving' me this win like turkeys carve-in-halfs.. with punches straight to your chest like a Brett favre pass.. |
very weak battle.....
lotto - terrible structure, hard to read, so a didnt really bother, got bored halfway thru..... hated - methinks all that was bitten? really not good....none of you deserve your first win..... laterz |
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you think wrong jack ass!! lets get some real voter and not the generic ones like freeman |
erm....only reason a cant vote is cuz this is a new account....my old one broke....so ive been on this site longer than you so stfu bitch
that vampire shit is deffinately bitten....dont argue and face facts.... END OF |
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Very one sided from where I sit. Ben was all over him with nice wordplay, good flow, a better rhyme scheme, and punches that were witty and hard. Oc's was a very simple rhyme in a bad paragraph format. Hurt the flow alot. What also hurt was that alot of his stuff didn't make alot of sense. The 'match' and 'calculator' lines were like, huh? There were a few more, but I won't list everything that was wrong with his verse. OC just needs to work alot harder on his rhymes, incorporate wordplay, and be more creative with his vocab. That will help produce better shots than the weak display I saw here. Please vote on my battle in return now. Thank you! Tobias vs. K
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Ok ben hated got this
punches: Ben Flow: Ben Wordplay:Ben this was one sided battle no doubt v: Ben return the favor and vote honest http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=99196 |
punches ben hated
wordplay ben hated closer ben hated return the favor HotRod vs McNookie HotRod vs Matt Dillon |
good lookin on tha votes kinfolks
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Ben hated murder kid... thats just a major fact that don't even need explaination... it was a OK battle... Ben i've seen better from you... but you really didn't need much in the first place....
vote-BH |
ben hated took this shit
flow-ben personals-none metas-ben opener-ben closer-none multis-ben overall vote-ben nice battle...i guess |
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