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4fil 01-01-05 11:11 PM

07. C.A.L.I vs 14. Socrates
 
Rules:

Battle opened......

Check in 48 hours after battle was opened
Drop verse 48 hours after check ing
Voting end 72 hours after verse was spit

16 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

Designated Voters:
TitoBronsky
9th Degree
Un'Touched
Viscosity
Ladi fiya
schema
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Blacklisted this round:
memesis
new method
smokkajokka

If you would like anyone on this list removed, you must PM 4fil BEFORE you drop your verse.

Logic The Goonie 01-01-05 11:44 PM

^^It's supposed to be 16 lines

But yeah anyways, don't spend all weekend prewriting buddy. :)

Sorry.... my mistake.... 16 lines.... fixed.....

50Cal. 01-02-05 12:12 AM

^thats seems highly unlikely at the least guess ill just k.o you again and shut you the fuck up

check check check check check

Logic The Goonie 01-02-05 02:47 AM



Fuckin with me son, and watch you get faded like ya clothes
Cuz when I say you aint squat......I aint talking bout ya pose
Im droppin punch after punch,no doubt that ya wrecked dude
I'll sweep the floor with you...with the broom you stand next to
I hate you dunny, trust you can see all the anger within me
So imma serve you quicker then ya job working at Wendy's
I feel this as basically a bye week, so to mods, I give thanks
For showin CALI is only half of me......in more than just ranks
And when it comes to battling son, believe that i'm doin it well
I mean take out the I in your name and you just C-A-L
And quit gainin weight son, its really quite bad for your health
You can make me eat my words...but you ate everything else
Keep fuckin with me man, i'll leave ya whole body reaarranged
Youll be a head by an arm and a leg...well at least your remains
Fuck this fat bitch, im done, so go and readjust your tampons
And watch Empire "fall out" like every floorboard he stands on

50Cal. 01-02-05 02:47 AM

Me lose??!!........check ya glasses ya facts blurry
You couldnt bring 'HEAT' if you came in a Shaq jersey
Punches played out its like ya flow roam in the 90s
Im so far ahead of you..........even ya time zone is behind me!!
How much i gotta beat you to teach till you see yous a ez mark?
Merk you this round for 'Free' and i aint talking bout 106 and park
How you shit on writtens with them bitten and twisted lines
You couldnt get the 'gift' to 'rap/wrap' at christmastime
My punches landing yours is 'phantoms' nobody sees um thrown
Soc tried to 'lift' his 'elevation'...........then forgot his weed at home!!
'MR' im too 'BIG' ......... you couldnt 'C' me if you was crippin cuz
Since you on 'MIKES' dick harder then 'Pippen' was!!!!
Post my pic or lines about my posts and dumb ass wendys jokes that are played
But we all saw that thread in L.L ........i refuse to lose to soc when he gay :nono:
Now lets see you win with a ya wack ass rhymes and a empty saddle
No fire and all ya dickriders...................... is over on rapbattles


EXPLANATIONS-
1-HES MR.BIG C THATS HIS ALAIS
2-HE GOT MADD D.Rs ON R.B
3-EVERYONE KNOWS HES A MIKE HAWK GROUPIE
4-IM IN NY HES IN CALI HIS TIMEZONE IS 3 HOURS BEHIND ME
5-HE WAS ON AIM TELLING MIKE HAWK HOW MUCH HE LOVES HIM SO FUCKING QUEER

50Cal. 01-02-05 02:52 AM

this is not a freepost we blind dropped check the times i knew hed come with gay ass wendys jokes lines and played shit like posting my pic so i anticipated it and had lines ready for it .now everyone drop honest votes.

Un'Touched 01-02-05 02:25 PM

Hahahaha My Vote Has To Go To Soc

Dayum This Was A Good Personal
I Laughed.
Soc My Fav Lines..
Fuckin with me son, and watch you get faded like ya clothes
Cuz when I say you aint squat......I aint talking bout ya pose
Im droppin punch after punch,no doubt that ya wrecked dude
I'll sweep the floor with you...with the broom you stand next to
hahahahahaaha^^^^

iight

Flow-Tie
Structure-Soc
Metas-Tie- Not Really
Multis-Tie- Not Really
Enjoyment-Soc- I Laughed When I Was Readin Your Shit Alot
Punches-Soc- SHit Hit Harder
Vocab-Tie

Overall

Nynth Degree 01-02-05 02:43 PM

Socrates:
Fuckin with me son, and watch you get faded like ya clothes
Cuz when I say you aint squat......I aint talking bout ya pose
Dope opener, good personals in both lines
Im droppin punch after punch,no doubt that ya wrecked dude
I'll sweep the floor with you...with the broom you stand next to
Another good personal/punch here
I hate you dunny, trust you can see all the anger within me
So imma serve you quicker then ya job working at Wendy's
And another...
I feel this as basically a bye week, so to mods, I give thanks
For showin CALI is only half of me......in more than just ranks
Nice personal here, playing off your seeds
And when it comes to battling son, believe that i'm doin it well
I mean take out the I in your name and you just C-A-L
Decent bar here
And quit gainin weight son, its really quite bad for your health
You can make me eat my words...but you ate everything else
Another nice bar here
Keep fuckin with me man, i'll leave ya whole body reaarranged
Youll be a head by an arm and a leg...well at least your remains
Decent
Fuck this fat bitch, im done, so go and readjust your tampons
And watch Empire "fall out" like every floorboard he stands on
Dope closer

C.A.L.I:
Me lose??!!........check ya glasses ya facts blurry
You couldnt bring 'HEAT' if you came in a Shaq jersey
Decent opener, played concept
Punches played out its like ya flow roam in the 90s
Im so far ahead of you..........even ya time zone is behind me!!
Decent punch here, ok wordplay in 1st line
How much i gotta beat you to teach till you see yous a ez mark?
Merk you this round for 'Free' and i aint talking bout 106 and park
Weak, punch didn't hit very hard
How you shit on writtens with them bitten and twisted lines
You couldnt get the 'gift' to 'rap/wrap' at christmas time
ice wordplay here, good punch
My punches landing yours is 'phantoms' nobody sees um thrown
Soc tried to 'lift' his 'elevation'...........then forgot his weed at home!!
Nice play off his name in first line, overall an aight bar
'MR' im too 'BIG' ......... you couldnt 'C' me if you was crippin cuz
Since you on 'MIKES' dick harder then 'Pippen' was!!!!
Good personals i both lines
Post my pic or lines about my posts and dumb ass wendys jokes that are played
But we all saw that thread in L.L ........i refuse to lose to soc when he gay :nono:
1st line was stretched, concepts here could've been worded better
Now lets see you win with a ya wack ass rhymes and a empty saddle
No fire and all ya dickriders...................... is over on rapbattles
Decent closer

Soc took this easily with harder punches, and good personals that stayed consistent throughout his verse. Cali, you had the potential in your verse, but you just couldn't deliver here. Your punches were worded poorly, and just not that dope.

V//Soc
[/honest vote]

FlowIntelligent. 01-02-05 08:21 PM

socrates:

Fuckin with me son, and watch you get faded like ya clothes
Cuz when I say you aint squat......I aint talking bout ya pose
^^dope personal dope opener good way to start it off 9/10
Im droppin punch after punch,no doubt that ya wrecked dude
I'll sweep the floor with you...with the broom you stand next to
^^well the broom part i thought was gay but everything else was good 6/10
I hate you dunny, trust you can see all the anger within me
So imma serve you quicker then ya job working at Wendy's
^^decent personal wendys personal against him are played though 5/10
I feel this as basically a bye week, so to mods, I give thanks
For showin CALI is only half of me......in more than just ranks
^^good punch 7/10
And when it comes to battling son, believe that i'm doin it well
I mean take out the I in your name and you just C-A-L
^^that was just dope C-A-L see a L dope lol 10/10
And quit gainin weight son, its really quite bad for your health
You can make me eat my words...but you ate everything else
^^ehh decent 5/10
Keep fuckin with me man, i'll leave ya whole body reaarranged
Youll be a head by an arm and a leg...well at least your remains
^^decent seen something similar to this 6/10
Fuck this fat bitch, im done, so go and readjust your tampons
And watch Empire "fall out" like every floorboard he stands on
^^dam thats just mean 9/10

overall : 57/80 (71%)

C.A.L.I:


Me lose??!!........check ya glasses ya facts blurry
You couldnt bring 'HEAT' if you came in a Shaq jersey
^^good meta good opener 7/10
Punches played out its like ya flow roam in the 90s
Im so far ahead of you..........even ya time zone is behind me!!
^^ dope punch 7/10
How much i gotta beat you to teach till you see yous a ez mark?
Merk you this round for 'Free' and i aint talking bout 106 and park
^^good meta wakc punch 5/10
How you shit on writtens with them bitten and twisted lines
You couldnt get the 'gift' to 'rap/wrap' at christmastime
^^rap/wrap lines are played 4/10
My punches landing yours is 'phantoms' nobody sees um thrown
Soc tried to 'lift' his 'elevation'...........then forgot his weed at home!!
^^lol good bar 7/10
'MR' im too 'BIG' ......... you couldnt 'C' me if you was crippin cuz
Since you on 'MIKES' dick harder then 'Pippen' was!!!!
^^woah dope fucking punch and personals 10/10
Post my pic or lines about my posts and dumb ass wendys jokes that are played
But we all saw that thread in L.L ........i refuse to lose to soc when he gay
^^ehh decent personal but its forced 6/10
Now lets see you win with a ya wack ass rhymes and a empty saddle
No fire and all ya dickriders...................... is over on rapbattles
^^first line stretched no matter how many dots u puts in the second line 5/10

overall : 51/80 (64%)

close battle but soc gets this one... cali would have won without the wrap/rap line and the last 2 bars should have dropped something more creative it seems like you rushed this verse

~Lady Fiya~ 01-03-05 10:56 AM

Empire your best line was:
'MR' im too 'BIG' ......... you couldnt 'C' me if you was crippin cuz
Since you on 'MIKES' dick harder then 'Pippen' was!!!!
^^had me dying laughing... omg nice personal

Socrates however, took this battle, he had sum really good punches and his personals were really good... This was one-sided, mos def..
This took the battle:
I feel this as basically a bye week, so to mods, I give thanks
For showin CALI is only half of me......in more than just ranks
And when it comes to battling son, believe that i'm doin it well
I mean take out the I in your name and you just C-A-L
And quit gainin weight son, its really quite bad for your health
You can make me eat my words...but you ate everything else

and Socrates closer was better..... the Wendy's line was played for Soc, but the gift wrap line and the 106th and Park/Free was also played.......

but empire that bar was perfect with the pippen and mike, all u had to do was bring some more of that, and u coulda had a chance....
V/ Socrates

4fil 01-03-05 07:55 PM

Designated Voters:

TitoBronsky
9th Degree - Voted Socrates
Un'Touched - Voted Socrates
Viscosity
Ladi fiya - Voted Socrates
schema
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt - Voted Socrates

Due to the majority of voters who all voted for Socrates.....
Socarates Advances into the next round........
C.A.L.I. Is in the playoffs for 3rd of 4th.......


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