LPMNDCTE vs Invicta
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

check in by 5 pm 4/15/09

drop by 8 pm

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-18-09 at 02:27 AM

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LPMNDCTE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-09 12:37 PM.

ya whole sex life's a hoax, but you love to slob down men
the last homie that got Invicta caught a disease from him
& its contagious & its a must I slaughter this gay fag
this yellow belly coward turn plush red for boys..
...and looks identical to the Maryland State Flag
claimed your beating the B.E.S.T., but I'm like dude whatever
if your words your bond, musta crazy glued that shit together
I wrecker the weaker, your agility is just lame
the power you pack couldn't even shake a bed post frame
its sad, n I can tell your mainly comming with cunt lines
why else would a pussy set up a battle on Front Lines
n I'm great at grappling...Leave ya back plastered
no escape...I cinch the master lock on him like Chris Masters

Invicta has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-09 02:47 PM.

check............................................. ...........

I hate your style, it's terribly played and a hirrid image with witness
Since you come up with enough wack shit to put 50 cent outta buisiness
So talk shit faggot I don't even listen, i'll stomp and shatter ur chin
Someone's got to be the bigger man.......it's just weird you hit on him
You'd never get in the studio guy, you are legit just a fuckin disgrace
The only way you impact RB is leaving with the imprint of my fist in ur face
Stop crying geek cuz you are worth nothin, u ain't no rock nor boulder
Only way your on top of you game is when your standing on X box controlers
I don't need shit for you, your poor with words, no need to repeat it
Cuz i bet if I came up with some hot shit, this broke fuck would prolly eat it

uppin for votes and feedback............................

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

LMNDCTE won this one for me... the battle didn't have many good punches... the one that won it for me was...

its sad, n I can tell your mainly comming with cunt lines
why else would a pussy set up a battle on Front Lines

I've seen lines like it done before, but the way he worded it was pretty good, and it was definitely the strongest line in the battle...

for Invicta, his best lines were...

Stop crying geek cuz you are worth nothin, u ain't no rock nor boulder
Only way your on top of you game is when your standing on X box controlers
I don't need shit for you, your poor with words, no need to repeat it
Cuz i bet if I came up with some hot shit, this broke fuck would prolly eat it

but they weren't all that great...

VOTE: LPMNDCTE

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

Check Out to of the beats i produced in the audio cypher

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=250488

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

Nice battle here but if I had to drop an honest vote lpmndct word get my vote......

Any other votes on this?....................................

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

Vote: LP for not having as much played shit























































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This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

Tight ass flow lp nice drop fam it really wasn't bad from both but if i could vote i would say u lp no dick ride you was jus on point wit erything the maryland state flag line i thought was not goin to be good but it turned out to flow nicely good job toboth.

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

Invicta

I hate your style, it's terribly played and a hirrid image with witness
Since you come up with enough wack shit to put 50 cent outta buisiness
^ hirrid? don't you mean horrid???...i unno i kinda liked this opener wasn't too bad feelin the punch a lil[b]

So talk shit faggot I don't even listen, i'll stomp and shatter ur chin
Someone's got to be the bigger man.......it's just weird you hit on him
[b]^ got the punch but just not feeling it...do you have any evidence?

You'd never get in the studio guy, you are legit just a fuckin disgrace
The only way you impact RB is leaving with the imprint of my fist in ur face
^ dude no dis-respect but concentrate on him and not how you'll hurt his face, self-glory isn't the best way to go[b]

Stop crying geek cuz you are worth nothin, u ain't no rock nor boulder
Only way your on top of you game is when your standing on X box controlers
[b]^ haha fuck knows if it's played or not given my absence but i liked it (i had a picture of that happening...cool line[b]

I don't need shit for you, your poor with words, no need to repeat it
Cuz i bet if I came up with some hot shit, this broke fuck would prolly eat it
[b]^ not the strongest of closers...IMO 4th bar should've been the closer...this was filler

Overall

Not overly bad but not great...4th bar i liked but i think filler took over your verse...maintained a constant text flow rhymes were basic and more multis would be more effective...

LPMNDCTE

ya whole sex life's a hoax, but you love to slob down men
the last homie that got Invicta caught a disease from him
^ maybe it's coz i'm English but meh..

& its contagious & its a must I slaughter this gay fag
this yellow belly coward turn plush red for boys..
...and looks identical to the Maryland State Flag
^ I'll have to go with you on that one i've never seen the Maryland state flag but it's alright

claimed your beating the B.E.S.T., but I'm like dude whatever
if your words your bond, musta crazy glued that shit together
^ whatever/together...not the strongest of rhymes...but the actual punch itself was funny

I wrecker the weaker, your agility is just lame
the power you pack couldn't even shake a bed post frame
^ hahaha getting consistent now cool bar

its sad, n I can tell your mainly comming with cunt lines
why else would a pussy set up a battle on Front Lines
^ cunt!...my fav word in the English language!!!...and another good bar...liked it

n I'm great at grappling...Leave ya back plastered
no escape...I cinch the master lock on him like Chris Masters
^ didn't feel this closer...fell off a bit from the previous 3 bars imo

Overall

Pretty much the same delivery and text flow-wise...I actually thought i was going to go against the grain and bring the battle to 2-1 until the 3rd, 4th & 5th bars...both dudes need to step up but i feel consistency won this...

v/LPMNDCTE - Plz RTF here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=250860

Oh btw...if i don't get an RTF within 7 days...i remove my votes...:thumbup: