US emcees freestyle
 

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yo these US emcees, they make me pull a screw face
they make me, wanna take my trainer an pull out my show lace
an then tie it round there throat an choke em till they get a blue face
till they die, an i have to cut up the body an put it in a suitcase
but i, am not a killer so instead i will just use mace
as long as im in this game ill never lose faith or lose face
ill never stop producing beats on logic or cubase
because i represent the UK, an ima take its scene to a new place
coz we got raw talent in every single council estate
where we got emcees pushing there mixtapes out by the crate
making hundreds,thousands of pounds, at hourly rates
but the only emcees getting airplay, come from the states
and i dont really think thats fairplay so ima retaliate
will attacks in the form of tracks just to get em irate
fucking pisstakes, too shook to call me out on ya mixtapes

you str8 i was feeling this kinda ,cause i liked therhymes but it didnt seem like you tried to go hard,go harder next time

why dont u try and leave some decent feedback, where i can pick up on the things where ive gone wrong..u need to step ya game up...in rapping, and in leaving feedback

oh shit..nigga 4real you cant fuck with me shit its whateva 4real
thays how i feel

cant fuck wit u? bitchboy please..im just stating facts, ya spits are wack, and so is ya fucking feedback..get the fuck outta my thread...and dont call me nigga, do that again, ill smash ya ego to pieces bitch boy....

shit its whateva ,you's a bitch ,and nothing more

IDk i thought it was weak lyrically but your flow was good