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DQ 08-22-05 04:40 AM

Paroxysm vs. .Lola Cruez. II
 
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Topic: Remnants Of The Reaper's Concious

Paroxysm 08-22-05 09:55 AM

Man..I've already did a topic like this ...was wonderin if you could change it with Tweety's permission of course :love:.... Checkin in by the way!

DQ 08-22-05 10:56 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paroxysm
Man..I've already did a topic like this ...was wonderin if you could change it with Tweety's permission of course :love:.... Checkin in by the way!


If you two agree on another topic, I shall change it right away...

Dervla 08-22-05 03:40 PM

LMAO! AGAIN!?...word..Let's do it up. Yeah change the Topic.

DQ 08-25-05 04:23 AM

Extension granted till Sunday, pm me a new topic

Paroxysm 08-28-05 06:01 PM

He fed a razor blade - it grazed - scraped against his face
Trimming at the facial glade - a daze - he tried to cut the haze
Police are on the way - unphazed - knows but stares a gaze
Reality won way - dismayed - he chases yesterday
My minds a mess - body aches - most of the time I don't see straight
I gorged I ate - for the past few weeks I've known naught but hate
Destroy creates - peace - the fate of my sister lead to this day
It made me this way - an instrument of fate - wielded to slay
She blushed at the world - just trusting the world
Entrusted with pearls of wisdom - still an innocent girl
So is this why her curls - are wild and unfurled - matted with blood
Is this why are her clothes are torn asunder from forcing of love
Flinched - as the coroner gave a shove - I'm at the morgue
This was a call I'd never expected at four in the morn
The misery worn - on her tatterd form - would haunt my mind
Leaving me in a pit of despair - near impossible to climb - out of
Count up - and tally the guilt - of the reality of
Whose fault it was - why she really got killed
I willed - with all my might to keep chill
But this disaster was a dish - and I'd foot the bill
I swilled - the last of my drink and my pills
Trying to dull - the overwhelming sadness I feel
Ill - wondering would this be the deal
If I hadn't strayed from her side - stayed at her heels
At her first college party - I was suppose to protect her
Instead I elected - to be derilect - left with Heather
An animal out of shelter - everything musta - been helter skelter
Wouldn't have been taken advantage of - had I been there to help her
treasured - the weariness invading - wanly anticipating
The moment I'd fade in to sleep - who needs counting sheep
When you have alchohol and painkillers within easy reach
Fleeing into blackness I finally feel asleep
Hours later I awakened - with a thirst that would not slaken
I had this urge to find the culprit of the crime
Give him a piece of mind - then kill him slow - like time
When I was through - leave him worse then when animals attack
So for weeks I tracked - the bloody murderers tracks
It seemed - I'd gain an uncanny craft - for knowing where he's at
A weary cat - since his heinous act - he always watched his back
But he'd drank too much this night - and that's what cost his ass
I found him - passed out on the couch - looked down with disdain
This was the source of such enormous grief anguish and pain
I knew his name - I knew the face - his gestures
Last semester - he'd been my favorite professor
I felt no remorse - as I killed him - rent his flesh
After I finished up - I let escape a weary breath
So this was it - all the fuss about grissly deaths
It hadn't been that bad at all - just a little mess
The doors shattered - he smiled - embracing the end
He had called police this morning - with murder confessions
Turned - yelled "Come and get me" - drew a weapon
Got shot 5 times - died - but bullets don't kill Revanants




- Revanants are dissatisfied beings that come back from the dead to rectify an injustice.

DQ 08-29-05 07:13 AM

Paroxysm advances to the final! Congrats!


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