Check My New Track!
WHat up ya'll ? It's the kidd Young Franchize, I got some new joints for ya'll. It's called "We Don't Play Games" feat. Young Pockets... Show respect and holla atcha boy. 1 Uno
www.soundclick.com/yungfranchize The two links are: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2438696 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208612 |
Alright Cool Man Yo Add Some Rhyme Scheme Here Yo But Flow Was Cool Lyrics Cool Quality Was Alright Maybe It's Just my Computer Though But Good Here Man!
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Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback... No doubt
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UPPIN ^ !! Holla atcha boy!
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sup, u sended me this today
this is dope, you got a dope quality and a dope voice seriously, like i told you, kinda gangsta voice, second dude is fucking dope, dunno his voice sounds mafia, i love his voice its like woah lol, chorus is cool too, beat , always loved this beat, u found that on soundclick? anyway overall dope track i want you on my mixtape holla back peace return the favor on : Tha Q-Cirque Du Soleil |
Respects on the feedback fam, fa real fa real
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1st dude.....ahh im not real impressed....delivery could be upped...flow could also be upped a lil bit....both are decent....lyrically your aright....some decent multies.....
hook.....its ok...not real real catchy....but...its decent... 2nd dude....coo voice....lyrically he could use some work.....only a couple decent bars....delivery and flow is pretty good.... also both work on rhyme scheme a lil...although in my opinion thats not that big of a factor..... PLEASE RTF...... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403 thanks...itd be appreciated |
Yea, I got chu homey... I'm a get on that..UnO.
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that was to speats... But thanx for the feedback
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uuupppiinnnn ^!
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