MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS Atticus
10-20 lines max
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jea...um fuck a check in dunny...no feedin
listen...dogg u must dont know me when it come da rap i speak fire // u "like men and women" u "bi-son" like da cat from "street fighter" //[think] rap bttles cant be serious if they da shit homie write a see me // dogg i'll send a bunch dudes 2 ya block in only white gt's // who like's ya bars? nobody only time u got "cheer's" is buyin "obie trice" cd // fagget u betta rest with pounds..when i spit i bet da vets a frown // u neva had "pussy" like dat "kanye and hov song" girls "neva let u down" // u think i wont hit ya dome...dick face go get ya chrome // dis fagget neva been da "jail" so only time he been in a "cell" was 1 of dos "picture phone's" // bring ya girl with u i'll be popin her breast plates // att u a "online super hero" u 1 of dem dudes rocin da "nets-cape" // datz enuff... |
i didn't read urs yet i just drop
So its a 'marvelous' nigga from Queens Don't rep that hood if u aint NaS cuz ur corney ass rhyme I haven't seen so I'm battlin this sucka I wanna C if he's sick like 'maleria' I'm slowin ya movement as if you trained like a 'tarrier' makin you lose 'weight' like 'parapelegic aids carria' Trace your last death u livin then I'll 'rebury ya' I kno ya got all ya guns on 'safety' bullets call em 'handi-caps' I'll leave you in so many 'wraps' couldn't 'ax' the doc for 'pain killa's' Nigga I'll re-route your veins like maps in iraq mistake'n clips for banana's throwin fits like gorrillas nothin like a black dude handlin U huh no filler lemme hear u so far atticus be the realest |
lol umm aight....now can niggaz pleez vote .......
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coo lines marv u got this battle, my raps r unstable as fuck... uppin
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jea yo uppin 4 fuckin votes man dez fuckin battles be up here 2 long......
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marvolous, i think imma up game... though its some'n i don't wanna do and when i learn how imma show u
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote ppl drop ya links i'll return da favor
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Lol well obviously yall know who g0t this...but imma explain
Punches:1009 Multis:N/a Vocab:Att Creativity:1009 structure:1009 Flow:1009 overall vote goes to 1009...for the fact his punches was on point..but the cell line is played..good shyt to both text heads...holla front Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
1009:
dis fagget neva been da "jail" so only time he been in a "cell" was 1 of dos "picture phone's" // ^^ Very Nice Marv won this fairly easy. More creativity, complexity, better delivery,... I couldn't quote any lines from the other guy. Marv you'd be even better if you could have a better text flow and up your vocab... vote: Marv.. |
aight yo dunnn u gotta poll vote 2 after u explain ya shit
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ite eazy win
marvolous had a beter opener closer punchz an shit anythang else to get waznt 1 of ur strongest flowz but shit didnt even need it against this kid best line out the battle who like's ya bars? nobody only time u got "cheer's" is buyin "obie trice" cd atticus didnt even understand wha uwaz tryna rap or wha u waz doin elevate get yo rhymez to where the barz actualy rhyme and get creative get some metaphorz best line only seen 1 in your sig no hate though vote/marv |
goodlookin out dunn.....y only got 1 poll vote damm
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote muthafuckas i jjust voted on madd niggaz battle return da fuckin favor
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^............................. .
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