olkingkole vs. the black plague
 

At least ten lines
I go first
Lets make this quick

Why is it that no one answers me back?
Do they run and hide when they glance at my raps?
Lets hope this one goes better cuz you know I'm on it.
You may be the black plague but my rhymes bubonic
They even kill superman like they was kryptonic
Flaunt it if you got it thats what I heard
So I flaunt my styles that aint nowhere near nerd.
I'm strict underground like Harriet tubman
And my rhymes was phatter than Jared the subman.
Just remember to tap out when you've had enough man.

olkingkole looks like he ran a hide afta lookin at your raps like very one else did

Hey man I hear they call you Ol King Kole the dumb ass hole
Cuz you make battles, but don't let your opponent know
Man you started a battle but didn't tell me i was in it
Dumb bitch..Now that i see it i guess i'll just finish it
I just saw your gay verse and my god it was pathetic
i was passed out on the floor laughing after i read it
"MEDIC! This guys heart stopped beating, hes not breathing
The only reason that I lived, was because i stopped reading
I'm not feeding off your verse, but man it really is tempting
so many gay lines in it, i know i could make fun of something
I think you've had enough, but I'll just end it with this finisher
Kid you bombed so bad, you surpassed the movie the punisher

Blak takes this with better punches......flow was okay on both parts.......both could use some elevation.....punches could be reworded a little bit better so that they hit harder other then that keep it up and elevate a little bit....peace

upping this shit.....

structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Punches: Black
Personals: Black
Enjoyed: Both
Vote: Black

Aight, 2-0, uppin again for votes

Uppin, please vote, and drop a link after your vote and I'll return the favor

If you want me to return a vote leave a link, I prolly will forget to look in your sig

God damn, vote please...

The BLack PLague took that shit cuz...

I liked the part when he was tallking about he was hardley breathing and only lived coz he stoped reading.. that was some good shit.. check it tho, olk was just whack man, his flow wasn't there punches wasn't there, nothin...

So my vote goes to Black Plague...

Yo, pay me back with a vote one one of my battle cuz, will u?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132904

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132827

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042

Peace

Yea Truth, I'll hit it up, uppin again

Black won this one easily. He talk'd about okingkole more than just talkin about himself. That's one of the most important things in battles. This battle was kinda weak. But olkingkole, keep at it and try ta get more creative by talking about your opponent rather than yourself. Black won this with harder punches and some personals.

Vote - Black

Return tha favor please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132978