Jiamine vs Hair Bear
 

Battle Rules:

10 -20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-01-06 at 02:01 PM

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Hair Bear has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-06 02:20 PM.

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Jiamine has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-06 09:51 AM.

Ah fuck it I'm feeling ill today so my verse is what it is...

Your shit's wack... you lack any degree of lyrical wealth
I'll abolish my verse... and leave you to own yourself
Your from a land of the perverse, I don't know what's worse
That..? Or you taking a year to write a verse?
You're a weak nigga, bitch your rhyming scheme is feeble
Wouldn't be sick if Whitney Houston stuck your arm with a needle
Lyrically I snap your neck until your vision fades to black
Your flow’s deluded like thinking hightop fades are back
But on the real you dope as fuck, nigga you can’t be stopped
Wipe the grin off your face… now look at the date I dropped

I Came to this Board, to Cut the Lights like a Power Outage\\
Heard HAIR BEAR typing Loud Text, Reminded me of a Coward Shouting \\

Now-a-days I don't play, Spit Lyrical Slugs with Rap Ammo \\
Ease the Pain with a Shot to the Brain, But I promise you it aint Jack Daniels \\

HAIR BEAR should've been Smart enough....Not to Except my Challenge \\
This Nicca'z Rhymez are so Stupid, Retarded Kids Reject his Talent \\

your Suppose'ta wear a Maxi Pad between your Legs to Cover your T'wat \\
This B!tch is a Waste of my Time, sort of like I thrashed My own Watch \\

I don't need much, to creep up, and Blaze up, Give him a Wake up \\
The Whole World already knows that HAIR BEAR is wearing some Make-up \\


HAIR BEAR is sort of like Sponge Bob, cuz I Left him with Holes, Soakin' Wet \\
My Words Created Arms that Beat you Down Till I Broke your Neck \\

Uppin FOR VOTES

Voted For: Jiamine

K..not much of a battle here


Flow: Jiamine
$tructure: Hair Bear
Per$onal$: Jiamine
Punche$: Jiamine
Creativity: Jiamine
Vocab: Jiamine
Multie u$e: Jiamine
Meta$: Jiamine

Hair Bear u came pretty weak, while J made an attempt....J'$ whole ver$e was betta putted 2getha in thi$ battle....No hate at all...an no favoriti$m either cuz I wa$n't feeling either 1 yall 2 bK real, cuz of tha played line$ but I had 2 vote 4 $umbody an I voted Jiamine, I feel he Really!!!!!!!!!!Out$hined in thi$ 1 out....deuce

rtf in thi$ battle here
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Voted For: Jiamine

Jiamine took this. i've never seen a text battle of yours dark, but i have to say, i think you can do better than that. jiamine just had better hiting punches and a stronger flow with helped the punches hit directly without failure. nice battle tho

please vote people

uppin............................................. .......

Voted For: Jiamine

Jaimine - Opener was weak. Second bar was a decent punch. Third bar was iight but the whole retard thing is kinda played. The fourth bar was a weak punch. LOL. Fifth bar was horrible. Closer was weak. Strengthin ya punches and add some multis.

D.P. - Wasn't feelin tha opener. Second bar was weak too. The punch in tha third bar was iight but the first line was weak. Fourth bar was another not so good one. Closer wasn't hot either. You didn't really have any punches that hit at all. Keep elevatin.

aite thanks for the feed fam

vote yall please