Da Don
 

Da don iz in the building/vacate da women & children/cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin/on a mission fo cream/stacked high to da ceilin/& on a watch out fo feanz cuz we makin a killin/im da dude Bra$co from da North of da Glass/im reppin my city cause my niggaz gettin dat cash/& i flip out like im micky nigga/got warrants so da fedz tryin ta get me nigga/u think i aint no killa dont temp me nigga/cause da nine or da 50 cal be spittin nigga/im da Don & i aint gone even say to much/cause by the look at yall rhymes some of yall play to much/& im a end diz flow introducin myself/ ya bitch pregnant tell her start inducin herself/i told yall im da don/Bra$co gets his shine on/but since i hooked up wit RapVerse.com ima a get my rhyme on/Biatch!!!!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE=$horty Bra$co]Da don iz in the building/vacate da women & children/cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin/on a mission fo cream/stacked high to da ceilin/& on a watch out fo feanz cuz we makin a killin/im da dude Bra$co from da North of da Glass/im reppin my city cause my niggaz gettin dat cash/& i flip out like im micky nigga/got warrants so da fedz tryin ta get me nigga/u think i aint no killa dont temp me nigga/cause da nine or da 50 cal be spittin nigga/im da Don & i aint gone even say to much/cause by the look at yall rhymes some of yall play to much/& im a end diz flow introducin myself/ ya bitch pregnant tell her start inducin herself/i told yall im da don/Bra$co gets his shine on/but since i hooked up wit RapVerse.com im a a get my rhyme on/dis here is fo yall in a different time zone/u cant see me wit perscriptions/no need for puttin ya eyes on/im dat dude dat boppaz & niggaz luv ta hate/so if u look at my position call me Bra$co da Great/

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you should change your way of writing...write it in lines instead of paragraph it fucks up the flow

instead of this...Da don iz in the building/vacate da women & children/cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin/on a mission fo cream/

put this...
Da don iz in the building
vacate da women & children
cause after dis freestyle it aint gone be no healin
on a mission fo cream...


^now you could notice how fucked up the flow and structure is....but anyway welcome to the site vote fairly

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