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schema 12-14-04 07:21 PM

Contendership Match: *Sdizzle .vs. *Stephen Elwood
 

Rules.

Read & Good Luck

Check Ins Are Due Wednesday By 12 Midnight Eastern
Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern
Links to 4 Votes MUST go in this thread or they won't be counted.

If your name is on this list you must vote this week or you will be banned for two weeks. So if you're not gonna vote you might as well no-show.

01.)God
02.)Stephen Elwood
03.)Amazing
04.)A1C
05.)4-Fil
06.)Enygma
07.)Mark Greyson
08.)Vango
09.)Ambient
10.)Teknikal Vuez
11.)Troop
12.)Ache


Tourney starts this week. There is a 10 million dollar prize for the winner. People with a star by their name are still in the tourney. Battles will still go on AS USUAL. So even if you are eliminated you will still have a battle the next week. You just won't have a star. People with a star that have a battle against someone without a star have a bye week. Good Luck!

sdizzle 12-14-04 07:28 PM

um... must i embarrass u again?

Stephen Elwood 12-15-04 01:51 AM

must i need to try this time?

but since i let you easy last time..

your gunna see the elwood you know i can show :)

20.

Stephen Elwood 12-17-04 06:27 PM

Fuck 20, how about we give dizzle some..

..not a stud to the ladies, them bitches aint standin' that shit...
last time his chick was worth checking out she asked paper or plastic...
little dickrider, no wonder they think ya turning slut...
when the only league you kill is where noone bothers turning up...
sayin' you a loner is false, but you know you aint spittin ill...
cause you lost ya best friend after realising Ronald Mcdonald was fictional...
diz dope? please, no way this kid is ill...
ill run so many circles around ya they make me the new olympic symble....
runnin' ya health, i give dizz chest spazms...
so ill break ya back.. and i aint talkin' bout orgasms..


done.

sdizzle 12-17-04 06:51 PM

i tried to relax, but he makes even the best times a hoarable vacation
with a verse made up of 3 played punches, a bitten line and a self glorification
u need to lighten up, ease some of that stress... realease some of that tension
& voting probation? cuz he only votes for people who voted for him.. hence none
we could read your ur weak personals, cuz thats where all the amusment starts
a star? shit kid rides the bench so much they turned it into an amusement park
u can kiss that star godbye.....aww his first kiss cuz his lovelifes' nonexistent
shit..his hands in his pants so often, he changed the meaning of poket pimpin
kid started out write 20, but then dwindled it down to the worst 10 he could write
the kids a step above the rest...... but that still leaves him short about a flight

Acuity 12-17-04 08:39 PM

vote: sdizzle

it was a toss-up (<--no gay jokes y'all) batween elwoods line:

diz dope? please, no way this kid is ill...
ill run so many circles around ya they make me the new olympic symble....

or sdizzles linessss:
i tried to relax, but he makes even the best times a hoarable vacation
with a verse made up of 3 played punches, a bitten line and a self glorification
u need to lighten up, ease some of that stress... realease some of that tension
& voting probation? cuz he only votes for people who voted for him.. hence none

oh and dis 1:

u can kiss that star godbye.....aww his first kiss cuz his lovelifes' nonexistent
shit..his hands in his pants so often, he changed the meaning of poket pimpin

e;wood came a lot stronga dan his battle against God but sdizzle was jus fresher and his punches were jokes.
Peace yo

sdizzle 12-17-04 10:44 PM

upping...........

T-Wrecks 12-18-04 12:05 AM

Wow... This battle sucked.

dizzle came way stretched and not really witty, seemed like statements to me.

Vote: Steph Elwood.

ache 12-18-04 12:46 AM

vote: sdizzle

punches may have been strechted, but there was more consistancy of landed punches than those of stephen. close but, dizzle.

4fil 12-18-04 06:20 AM

deffinatly vote to sdizzle..... although the lines were a bit stretched... you still came a lot hard with punches and personals.... a nice bit of comedy there asweell
VOTE.... sdizzle

Ambient 12-18-04 10:06 AM

steph elwood:

ur opener and closer was recycled.. i'm sure i seen you use them two bars on rb and u just re-arranged them. only decent bar was the mcdonalds one but still i think i heard that one before.

sdizz: verse structure was kinda fucked up.. but some nice punches. opener was good. 2nd bar was pretty nice too. 3rd bar made me laugh. last 2 were blah.

dizzle had harder punches and better creativitie.

v/ sdizzle

Nynth Degree 12-18-04 04:20 PM

..not a stud to the ladies, them bitches aint standin' that shit...
last time his chick was worth checking out she asked paper or plastic...

vs.

kid started out write 20, but then dwindled it down to the worst 10 he could write
the kids a step above the rest...... but that still leaves him short about a flight

Vote - Elwood, for harder punches, although he had 1 or 2 stretched lines. Sdizzle's lines, however, were all stretched, and his punches weren't that great.

L.E 12-18-04 07:47 PM

A'ight it was not a great battle...it was close. Both had an uneven structure...disposing many points for flow that are so easily to get. Punches were good on both sides...Elwood actually had personals...but SDizzle's punches were better, and that is what a battle is about.

Vote- SDizzle

Enygma 12-19-04 02:54 AM

Booo......this battle could have been so much better. Dizzle came really stretched and only had one line that caught my eye.....maybe it's because it took me too long to read each one. Stephen had a punch or two that were ok, therefore he wins this one in my eyes....

Vote - Stephen (The Wood) Elwood

~Luciano~ 12-19-04 03:38 AM

stinked.....dizzle 4 shizzle


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