Stuff Going On #1
Stuff Going On #1
From a magnificent block need keys for different locks Some doors won’t open galore are broken drama don’t stop This is a disaster G without a master key so I’m unprotected With a fun flow rejected locked out the block clout neglected So my piece of work will be feasted on my jerks I’m standing bold Demanding scrolls a skill rap mechanic cats thrill on crap romantic And perhaps panic real stuff hit their ears sink like the Titanic Like a trooper use wise means to supervise schemes and antics Look I be free living as degrees are given me from college because I have some knowledge and take complex looks at textbook and pause On some chapters about rappers doe some are so ill and dim Like lil Kim didn’t understand the fury of lying to a grand Jury now stem With jail time and prevail behind bars but mange to rip Foxxy Brown Before all this I still believe she got a jiggy baby from being Biggy’s Lady Somewhere hid out like Janet Jackson’s child in romantic action wild and crazy It thrill me to know Lil E which is Easy E’S son is bringing back NWA In all this trouble today double to say this is cool the world is befuddle anyway So its proper to say doctor DRE is a rap author to stay Ice Cube and Yo Yo Is gonna go loco on this, even Queen Lativah may become a mean Diva for show I try for peace but TYRESE is making it difficult by becoming a rapper and Singer just chapters of a smoke bringer on the album one side singing The other rapping at the club swinging lovers clapping DJ slinging Hits for real yo, so TYRESE is gonna let the facts fly with the rapper name BLACK TY with these acts try get stardom by making chapters flame |
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2 bars from solo would destroy a thousand of yours :thumbup: learn proper sentence structure n use punctuation when you write, cuz as of now your as fuckin wack as sinner |
naw that mean you're whack just like i said hell did you say puntuations marks in a flow HA! HA! HA! HA!
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i would destroy you in any catagory regarding rap...
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You are an ass if you think those things mean something. |
Yeah... but he's Daz. Anyways... this isn't the best open mic... no doubt... 6/10
your working your way up... rtf... |
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dumbfuck, they would help his syllable counts so peeps might understand his concepts better.... your so fuckin arogant to call me an ass..... :thefinger |
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Sllyable counts? Shut up... U know nothing about RAP... All you know is text. If you ever used a pen,instead of a keyboard to write verses.. then you would fucking know that "proper sentence structure n punctuation" don't mean shit.. You fucking suck.If you don't understand this guy's writing style...then fuck off. Don't go telling him to change his whole fucking style and shit.. And calling you an ass is nothing to do wit arogance... So bassically... your so fucking stupid to call me arragont :thefinger |
Well... this is text not audio.
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It's all supposed to be rap regardless. And besides...you are ALWAYS supposed to write your songs in a way you could spit in real life... |
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youve been owned by everyone that has a inch of talent wanna get merked, we can battle, otherwise stfu |
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I've been wanting a battle . since the day I first posted in that cypher........kiddo :thumbup: so yea..set it up. |
Thanks Fo Rthe Props On This One For Real It Took A Lots Of Courage
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Yo Gladbag... rtf on my open mic since I left u feed...
Link is In My Sig... Called 'The Pulpit' I'd Appreciate it. |
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