invictus vs Tie-D
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-22-05 at 10:29 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Tie-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-05 10:37 AM.

invictus has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-05 11:03 AM.

first text in like a year...... youll be my first victim
this 'lone soldier' couldnt win with his whole army with him
first mistake was thinking you could win... im just laughin
cuz when you get ya '3rd loss'.. youll be like what happend?!?!
this kid tryna say hes 'Tie-D'... must be retarded
...cuz i seen 'cleaner shit' come out my 'ass' when i 'farted'
its time to 'wrap this up'... cuz i dont need 'aids'
but you could use all the help you can get...
..... thats why ya gave ya self two days

- i aint battled text in almost a year
- lone soldier in his sig
- hes got 2 losses.. this will be his 3rd :)
- his names Tie-D (as in clean)
- aids (the deseace) and aids (people that help)
- he set it up with 1 day to check and 1 to drop

Invictus steps up, the poet of mighty C.S
Mighty? About as much as American idol rejects
CS used to have power and respect from peeps
Now wat do I see, they are lead by a ….she
Willa, no offence but the laughs start here
Did u let this guy in? situation must be severe
Is CS that desperate for members, they let in this gimp?
I’ve read his work, GUILTY of CHRYME’s to ink!
I said 6 to 10 lines, so il use it all up
I would say now lay down but hes so dumb he’ll fall up!

my opinion is you've got a really good verse there. Full of good punches and some nice metaphors.

If you take the win i know the one thing i can do is use more metaphors.

thanks for the battle bro. Once again good luck

and just so you know you made a huuuge mistake.... :nono:

IM NOT ATTICUS NOR AM I IN CS

lol sorry just thought you should know..

i never thought you were..??

why would you think that?

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

Lmao @ all the explanations..

Dude, we have more intellegence than you think..

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well i aint done text in a while thought id explain it thourougly lol
and i assumed youd think i was atty cuz you dissed crhyme sindicte but im not in CS.... im in Living Legends

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This was feedback posted for invictus
 

pollz fam, you should have this easily...good looks

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

I am just checking out the polls here.

..yeup, just the polls.

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

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