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That's Me
www.soundclick.com/jiddyjid
yeh, first track I left feed on Tha Q - Grimey Slap and CALI ft. Senser - Spark That Clip |
feelin' the violins in this beat...LMAO @ no homo...
ya mic's clear but stop breathin' so hard on it, lol...I wasn't expecting much from you cuz the beginning was eghh, but damn, you actually got flow, hahaa...them "bite me" bars were nyce dude...usually most "faggot" lines are wack, but I liked your bars on that shit jo, lol... feelin' the hook on this too kyd, you got nyce prescence, just need a new mic...you got skiLLz dawg, why muh FUCKahs sleep when they don't recogniZe the person is beyond me...people wiilll never know any new talent on here unless you BEG their asses to give you feedback -smh- that "1st grade" line was nyce...multies are nyce in here, but your flow's better in the first verse, it's wierd this verse...your first verse was definetly better, good ish though man, I'm really feelin' you...check my jawn "Dangerous Grounds" feat. Milkman... maybe we can collab some time, get at me... |
^ Thanks...muhfuckas is gay tho, I'M LOTTY MUHFUCKAS, remember that.
About the collab, if I have time, I gotchu.. uppin bish's |
lol @ the ramblin on at the beginnin
Get to the rappin man...cuz that build up was not happenin ur voice is good u have a good flow... more mic presence would make udope good track...but the gay bashing is not necessary.PERIOD. 1 |
quality needs work flow was good overall i liked it it was coo lookin forward to the next one...:)
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aight feelin the beat...
aight flow was coo..breathe control problems here and there...fell of at a few spots...delivery was ok...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...sound like you just reading of the paper...lyrics were aight...chorus was str8...you need a pop filter fam...overall i see potential just need to polish up...if you want a couple pointers holla at me...peace return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661 |
wow.. more then i was expecting.. build up was wack like q said.. but damn your flow is nice.. the lyrics was nice the whole way thru.. you got a good voice for rap.. and this was really good beat choice.. good job man.. looking forward to more drops from you pz..
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Urrrrrrppppiiinnng...
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this is my basic feedback right here lyrics were str8 to me u do have potential just..get that deliveru up emotion up dont sound like u yellin make it natural and try goin over your lines before u spit them...ur lyrics are actually really good stay up |
wtf? lol@ the buildup....nice voice, good flow on this track, you had some good lines too, overall i liked this track,just work on some minor mixing problems like pops and what not, havent heard anything from you before but dope shit so far, keep it up.1
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i'm feeling this beat... your voice sounds fine on the track u just need help wit production.. stop singing tho.. i'm not feeling that lil' intro. your flow's pretty decent, but u can tell you just got off of text battling.. stay up tho
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Sounds liek you had 2 false starts that you tried to make into a hook. You got all sorts of quality issues on this. Read the link in my sig and save me a good 40 mins of typing but stopping moving around would the the firstmajor step. The flow was net-ish seeing that they were the exact same flow on every single line and all your lines were on a 1-syl rhymescheme. Easy to tell you did text way before you ever spit. Lyrics were pretty good and had some good content. Deliv didn't stand out to me, but was good enough to get most of the job done. Never liked the beat when 50ยข was on it and I'm still not crazy about it now. Not a GREAT track lyrically speaking, but a good one. Def could have been better and still said the same thing.
Edit: oh yeah, forgot to mention. The flow was lumpy seeing that sometimes you sped it up to try to smush all the syls in one bar then slowed it back down to the normal pace the bar right after. |
iight..
This shit was pretty good lyrically, you just need more experience mixing and spittin on the mic... Go to Audio Assistance forum and look for a thread Everything you need, and then look under cool edit, theres alot of tips in there on how to make your tracks sound more professional, and just keep spittin, try and put a lil more energy into your delivery, but u on the right path so far, good shit...1 |
feelin the beat..............i like the hook, but i didn't feel the 1st verse all that much.............call your bitch lullaby cause everybody slept with her, that was dope..........y'all gangters cause gangsters pop, another hot line........................................over all a good track but a great one, about a B maybe a B plus........
holla back at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850 |
upping son, real talk.
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