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New Edition 08-24-05 11:37 AM

Tekneek vs New Edition
 
Battle Rules:

6 -10Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-05 at 12:07 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 08-24-05 11:37 AM

New Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:37 AM.

System 08-24-05 11:38 AM

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:38 AM.

New Edition 08-24-05 12:02 PM

I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical,
u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you,
man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2,
i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland,
but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands

YouKay 08-24-05 12:12 PM

imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”….....

yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…......
but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’.......

Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,.......
for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”…

look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....

New Edition 08-24-05 12:14 PM

yo nice man...no hate..i forgot my explanations but thats nothing.......

PrahJect 08-24-05 12:24 PM

This was feedback posted for New Edition
 
OK, white u elevated alot in battling, teknical lol at that L's line, pretty good, i was impressd by that, cant vote because of crew, gd luck both u

13th. 08-24-05 12:24 PM

This was feedback posted for New Edition
 
checkin pollz.............................................

Young Blaze 08-24-05 12:45 PM

Voted For: Tekneek

I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical,
^^^no...weak opener.
u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you,
man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2,
^^^ight punch not really effective
i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland,
but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old
englands
^^^No Weak Closer.....

imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”….....
^^^Good Opener Nice punch
yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…......
but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’.......
^^^Ight punch solid nuthin special
Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,.......
for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”…
^^^Ight Punch again.....
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....
^^^good Closer.....

V/Tekneek this was a onesided battle tek came wit good punchs an wordplay but u need more personals....New work on ur punchs an the wordplay u had to basic punchs an need to use more personals....
V/Tek......Rtf THE FAvor In Sig or This VOtes REmoved.....1

YouKay 08-24-05 01:52 PM

Thx..................upping

YouKay 08-25-05 08:50 AM

2...............

Vaskez 08-25-05 08:59 AM

Voted For: Tekneek

I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical,
^^wordplay is ok, but punch is weak
u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you,
man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2,
^^no diss
i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland,
but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands
^^no diss

work on actually dissing and making your wording better

vs.

imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”….....
^^quite good
yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…......
but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’.......
^^not direct enough
Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,.......
for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”…
^^why are you talking about dudes in general? Diss your opponent foo!

v/tekneek

drop a vote in my sig, thanks

look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....

Vaskez 08-25-05 09:00 AM

sorry missed this bar from the feedback:
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....
^^ok wordplay, but how is not having been in jail a good diss? The answer is, it aint/

Man you only took this, cos your opponent was so wack

YouKay 08-25-05 12:59 PM

bump......................

New Edition 08-26-05 01:40 PM

uppin............................................. ..........


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