Tekneek vs New Edition
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6 -10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-24-05 at 12:07 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
New Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:37 AM.
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Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:38 AM.
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I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands |
imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... |
yo nice man...no hate..i forgot my explanations but thats nothing.......
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This was feedback posted for New Edition
OK, white u elevated alot in battling, teknical lol at that L's line, pretty good, i was impressd by that, cant vote because of crew, gd luck both u
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This was feedback posted for New Edition
checkin pollz.............................................
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Voted For: Tekneek
I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, ^^^no...weak opener. u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, ^^^ight punch not really effective i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands ^^^No Weak Closer..... imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... ^^^Good Opener Nice punch yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... ^^^Ight punch solid nuthin special Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… ^^^Ight Punch again..... look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... ^^^good Closer..... V/Tekneek this was a onesided battle tek came wit good punchs an wordplay but u need more personals....New work on ur punchs an the wordplay u had to basic punchs an need to use more personals.... V/Tek......Rtf THE FAvor In Sig or This VOtes REmoved.....1 |
Thx..................upping
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Voted For: Tekneek
I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, ^^wordplay is ok, but punch is weak u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, ^^no diss i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands ^^no diss work on actually dissing and making your wording better vs. imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... ^^quite good yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... ^^not direct enough Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… ^^why are you talking about dudes in general? Diss your opponent foo! v/tekneek drop a vote in my sig, thanks look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... |
sorry missed this bar from the feedback:
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... ^^ok wordplay, but how is not having been in jail a good diss? The answer is, it aint/ Man you only took this, cos your opponent was so wack |
bump......................
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uppin............................................. ..........
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