lyrical mc vs. disaster master
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Aiight...lyrical Mc Checkin In.... I Will Drop By Thurday Man

the Master of Disaster cheaking in.. i'll drop thursday. who goes first?

ok im gona drop first...and right now

right now im gona expose u
then after that i will despose of u
homie im gona get satirical
show ur human foly and ridicule
Its a mirical that ur can be half as lyrical as mystical
but all that raper says is watch yourself
after im done ur gona' remember myself
dissmember ur member and have u supported like suspenders
dont get mad at me cuz u cant stand and deliver
Dude im the best mc it stands for muzikly conditioned
but for u mc means half mentaly cognitioned
now im in a position to ravage plunder and kill
i'm a natural croud plesser with a licence to thrill
I'm a savage and i'll rip ur spine out ur anul cavity
take ur limbs and lines and bunch them up and intertwine
then disemmboul you with out showing any sensitivity
I'm the new world order and ur the first to die
all ur raps sound bitten and they all sound like a lie
u bite from corny bitches that got a low suppy
when i elevate in this bitch gravity will be defied
Dj emcce's like dam vanilla ice just dissed you
homie quit now its ok, just subdue
pull 8 pints of blood to be imbued
get some air freashiner u smell like boo-boo
u stink more than an old person will caterak in they draws
u aint in dopeness no more dorthy cuz im the rap wizard of OZ
sever ur 2 major nervous systems without any hesitation or flaws
theres nothing that can stop me from devouring all ya raw

Dis Is How It goes....

Desater Master Hyped On Dick Rhydin' Faster,
Defintion of his punch couldnt hit harder flyin' plaster,
His DNA Sceintist say has restircited Genes,
Still anit Past Puberty and his rhyme inflicted dreams,
He Steps to da mic but spit Hostility,
Hypes bout streez talk like he admits to verginity,
The way i tormant him verbaly is like butt and tissue,
Wippin' my arse wid him like his rhyme sput was no issue,
Peeps call him "dingy" the way hes blown up and deflated,
Obesity Consiquenced him as hes neva Jackualted,
Fuck Jackulated his neva masterbated srayin' shit over rated,
His 1-1 battle Rec mirrors his freinds and ememys,
Dumb Fuck hewb can't be Helped wid drugs or remadies,
His rhyme is restricted to wack as he bites rhyme,
Mic cred at sub zero tempretures as his wackness combine,
I caught his punch like at verble weekness hes king,
His last breath in RB hes invaded as i riun his sing,

thats tight lets get some votes in here now, good luck.

yeah^^good luck.........vote peeps

yo wurss da pole

we wont votes...dis is a league....

Lyrical MC: 7/10
I Liked Your Verse, Multis Were Nice and Metas Were Good. Punches Were Good But Not Many Persoanls. Still Overall Good Spit.

Disaster Master: 5/10
You Need To Get Your Mulits and Metaphors In Check. Your Punches Need To Be Harder and You Just Need To Come Harder Overall. I Mean I Like Ya FLow, But Work On Da Complexities Of Your Ryhmes.

Vote: Lyrical MC

~R~

lyrical M.C. 6/10
hard to understand but good punches.flow was nice and lyrical but too plain.
best line was; His 1-1 battle Rec mirrors his freinds and ememys,
Dumb Fuck hewb can't be Helped wid drugs or remadies,

Disaster Master 7/10
good punches,good use of metophors,overall better flow nice lyrics.kinda basic but good.best bar was; dissmember ur member and have u supported like suspenders
dont get mad at me cuz u cant stand and deliver
my vote goes to disaster master

ok....1-1...uppin 4 more votes.... :D

iight...i wasnt really feelin this battle...just simple

but
LYRICAl..came correct flow was on point and got personal wit his shit...not too many punches or metas

DISASTER...um you need to work on metas and punches dog...you got the idea but you aint really followin through with the shit...get it together and you could have a solid verse

my vote goes to LYRICAL cuz he came wit the punches, more dissin, and personals in his verse (ima metaphor guy myself but props for the verse)

iight man!! keep spittin yall!

gunits vote? was that a vote if soo it dont count.

1-2 come on vote in here