Narkotic vs XDipsetsX
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 04-24-05 at 07:24 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

NarKotic has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 07:00 PM.

XDipsetsX has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 07:01 PM.

I pulled Dipsets tube like Terry Shivo,
I'll beat your ass worse then Rodney King Got beat by "5-0",

And by dissen you I dissed your Pops, I knocked the dust off your moms pussy, Just to get props,
Your more bitch like then chicks in porn flicks grinding cocks,

And with these words I create a topic, Thats catastrophic,
because my flows sicker then a Priest coming out the closet.....


took 2 minutes so top it

Narkotic Couldn't Beat Me If He Had More Then Four Votes*
So I Puncture His Chest And See How This Whore Gloats
Ya Chances Of Beating Me Is Worse Then Retards Passing
His Bars Are So Crooked You Can't See Which Line's Matching
De-Taching His Wrist, Now His Punches Consists Of Stubs
After This He'll Be Folded Up, Like Them Pull Out Rugs Cuz

*Think About It It's A Metaphor

This was feedback posted for XDipsetsX
 

weak battle

narkotic
structure-was very bad it read like a paragraph, and its hard to find wat rhymes with wat

personals-none

punches-weak had no effect on dipset

so much self glorifiaction

dipset
strucure-good way better than narkotics

personals-they were present and ok nuthin to make me jump out of my seat

punches-were good and pretty decent to help him win dis battle

but hey since yall gay ass rules for 500 posts man u lost a vote

Haven't Battled In A Grip So I'm Rusty But Yea Upping

Hmm. Upping This Then No Votes? Wow! Site's Kind Of Whack

This was feedback posted for XDipsetsX
 

Narkotic Couldn't Beat Me If He Had More Then Four Votes*
So I Puncture His Chest And See How This Whore Gloats
decent start direct hit could of been better if worded better

Ya Chances Of Beating Me Is Worse Then Retards Passing
His Bars Are So Crooked You Can't See Which Line's Matching
good diss, slight hit

De-Taching His Wrist, Now His Punches Consists Of Stubs
After This He'll Be Folded Up, Like Them Pull Out Rugs Cuz
good ending, decent metaphore ya lines was straight no personals, couple of punches not a bad verse




I pulled Dipsets tube like Terry Shivo,
I'll beat your ass worse then Rodney King Got beat by "5-0",
2ed line wasnt that creative but kinda flow good thou decent start

And by dissen you I dissed your Pops, I knocked the dust off your moms pussy, Just to get props,
Your more bitch like then chicks in porn flicks grinding cocks,
a little multis, but not a good hit should of re-worded again no hit here just flowing

And with these words I create a topic, Thats catastrophic,
because my flows sicker then a Priest coming out the closet.....
not a bad ending u could of hit harder that would of help but ua int come as hard as dipset close battle but dipset had better lines and harder hits all around good battle

vote: dipset

Upping This MotherFucking Shit Man........................

Voted For: XDipsetsX

dipsests got dis he had harder punches dey wasnt the best but they was better then narkotics his verse was easier to read and yea it wasnt overall better

oenor-dipsets harder punch
punches-dipsets harder punches
personals-none
stukture-dipsets
closer-dipsets was harder

dipsets took it aint much to explain

Thanks Cuzz Upping This Shit Now...................

Voted For: XDipsetsX

.....dipsets took this one easily....punches were harder & landed

Voted For: XDipsetsX

both wack but dip gets it for actually throowin a punch,

Ya Chances Of Beating Me Is Worse Then Retards Passing
His Bars Are So Crooked You Can't See Which Line's Matching

pretty nice concept so was aight... thats it really, rtf or il have my vote dq'ed...

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