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Archeologist 10-02-04 08:30 PM

Socrates 'vs' sPuL
 
Rules
Good Luck Both


Socrates wins with 5 votes

Artemis 10-02-04 08:31 PM

aiight Phantom lets do this. checkin' in...

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...286&postcount=6

Logic The Goonie 10-02-04 08:43 PM

this=best battle of whole tourny

checkin in, g'luck kid.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153074

Logic The Goonie 10-03-04 04:02 PM

First round and i'm ready, let the games begin
And watch SPuL pop-up with the AIM to win
Don't talk shit kid.............i'll put you in greif
Plus man youre Indian, you can't have beef
So SPuL, using jokes is why you can't be defeat?
I should bite your style use your name in repeat
SPuL can't live without RV, its hard to focus
So he made a huge comeback!...
...which nobody noticed.
First round ousting, you can't deal with the best
Cuz even in your name "u" ant as big as the rest

Artemis 10-03-04 04:02 PM


Gettin' voted Rookie for September

^These help out verse. weerd

Forgot that you suck, I'll give you cookie~to~remember
Kid, you're not a vet, cuz you got rookie~fo~September
Remember I'm defender, and you the wack~challenger
Put an "x" on yo verse, like the days on that~callender
Kid, I got yo girl, jus like yo pic you should be duckin'
She a Hilton hoe, but the world won't see her suckin'
Verse is skinny wit the punches, mine is Full~thickness
...sig of yo alias, he reps SPuL~Sickness
Like R.O.D's wack career, your rhymes also fell~off~wit~her
Believes he can be "God"... so he turned to Greek Philosopher


ROD-Rosie O'Donnel


weerd. Uppin' for votes

Introspect. 10-03-04 04:11 PM

aight this was a ok battle vocab goes to phantom structure goes to phantom but punches go to spul i thought his hit harder was feelin both verses but for me punches win battles an thats why this battle goes to spul good job to both....vote - spul....

Abraxas 10-03-04 05:30 PM

this was a good battle props to both....
SPuL: fuck ya verse was igiht nice lines and a nice verse overall but it didnt seem you tryed it was kinda weak and not that good.... you had sdome iight and good punches and funny and iight personals though the personals didnt come as hard... ya flow was iight though it was a lil bit wack nearing the end same with ya structrer it wasnt that good at the end.... ya verse needed more improving cos there are allot of personals you can get with socrates.. o well nice verse overall

Socrates: ummm nice verse now you erally tryed hard on ya first verse it was real good and ya had mad strong punches though some of ya personals were kinda played by people he battle before like that beef thing.... also ya personals were iight overall... ya flow was very good and ya structre was god

Vote is allowed, Paramik voted for Socrates

Archeologist 10-03-04 06:29 PM

Vote is valid he voted against a crew member so its all good.
Spul Lmao sort your crew loyalty out.
Pz.

Recluse 10-03-04 06:48 PM

First round and i'm ready, let the games begin
And watch SPuL pop-up with the AIM to win
was aight could have been and better opener
Don't talk shit kid.............i'll put you in greif
Plus man youre Indian, you can't have beef
wasn't feeling this...you could have been better
So SPuL, using jokes is why you can't be defeat?
I should bite your style use your name in repeat
first line was dope second wasn't there
SPuL can't live without RV, its hard to focus
So he made a huge comeback!...
...which nobody noticed.
dope as fuck
First round ousting, you can't deal with the best
Cuz even in your name "u" ant as big as the rest
ummm okay


Forgot that you suck, I'll give you cookie~to~remember
Kid, you're not a vet, cuz you got rookie~fo~September
nice opener....dope
Remember I'm defender, and you the wack~challenger
Put an "x" on yo verse, like the days on that~callender
kinda played out but okay....
Kid, I got yo girl, jus like yo pic you should be duckin'
She a Hilton hoe, but the world won't see her suckin'
lmao.......dope
Verse is skinny wit the punches, mine is Full~thickness
...sig of yo alias, he reps SPuL~Sickness
nice.........
Like R.O.D's wack career, your rhymes also fell~off~wit~her
Believes he can be "God"... so he turned to Greek Philosopher
was aight..not the best closer


overall my vote goes to spul.......

vote:SPul

sdizzle 10-03-04 07:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
First round and i'm ready, let the games begin
And watch SPuL pop-up with the AIM to win
not a personal... kinda wack
Don't talk shit kid.............i'll put you in greif
Plus man youre Indian, you can't have beef
..... nope
So SPuL, using jokes is why you can't be defeat?
I should bite your style use your name in repeat
wack
SPuL can't live without RV, its hard to focus
So he made a huge comeback!...
...which nobody noticed.
lol
First round ousting, you can't deal with the best
Cuz even in your name "u" ant as big as the rest

decent




Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL

Gettin' voted Rookie for September

^These help out verse. weerd

no -
Forgot that you suck, I'll give you cookie~to~remember
Kid, you're not a vet, cuz you got rookie~fo~September
.... poorly worded... decent idea - horrible structure though ~ ~
Remember I'm defender, and you the wack~challenger
Put an "x" on yo verse, like the days on that~callender
wack
Kid, I got yo girl, jus like yo pic you should be duckin'
She a Hilton hoe, but the world won't see her suckin'
wtf god no
Verse is skinny wit the punches, mine is Full~thickness
...sig of yo alias, he reps SPuL~Sickness
wack as fuck
Like R.O.D's wack career, your rhymes also fell~off~wit~her
Believes he can be "God"... so he turned to Greek Philosopher
NOPE

ROD-Rosie O'Donnel


weerd. Uppin' for votes


v/ socrates for being slightly less wack and making me laugh in one punch

Cocaine 10-03-04 07:48 PM

mah.. close battle both came so-so... socrates u had a nice verse.. but some of the lines was wack.. spul ur rosie odonnel line was wack but the rest was pretty ill... good personals from both.. but for overall harder punches vote goes to spul..

Immense 10-03-04 07:49 PM

good battle...phantom...nice verse....some good personals in there....flow and structure was aight...ok wordplay...i liked the closure...nice personal...but i dont think the punches were to hard...they could have been harder....overall...good verse...

spul..another nice verse...personals again....flow and structure on spot...wordplay was good...and i reckon ur punches hit harder...altho it was a close battle....overall....another good verse...

nice battle guys..my vote=spul

Plutonium 10-04-04 12:49 AM

First round and i'm ready, let the games begin
And watch SPuL pop-up with the AIM to win
^^^nice opener
Don't talk shit kid.............i'll put you in greif
Plus man youre Indian, you can't have beef
^^^nice
So SPuL, using jokes is why you can't be defeat?
I should bite your style use your name in repeat
^^^aight
SPuL can't live without RV, its hard to focus
So he made a huge comeback!...
...which nobody noticed.
^^^nice personal
First round ousting, you can't deal with the best
Cuz even in your name "u" ant as big as the rest
^^^aight closer

Forgot that you suck, I'll give you cookie~to~remember
Kid, you're not a vet, cuz you got rookie~fo~September
^^^aight opener
Remember I'm defender, and you the wack~challenger
Put an "x" on yo verse, like the days on that~callender
^^^not feeling this punch......
Kid, I got yo girl, jus like yo pic you should be duckin'
She a Hilton hoe, but the world won't see her suckin'
^^^hahaha....
Verse is skinny wit the punches, mine is Full~thickness
...sig of yo alias, he reps SPuL~Sickness
^^^aight personal.......
Like R.O.D's wack career, your rhymes also fell~off~wit~her
Believes he can be "God"... so he turned to Greek Philosopher
nice closer

overall I vote Socrates, I'm not feeling spUl's punches as much as phantoms, he had better verse, and his punches hit harder

Logic The Goonie 10-04-04 01:44 AM

iight, looks like we have a battle, uppin...

Logic The Goonie 10-04-04 09:32 PM

uppin, yall needa vote please.


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