Hybrid Echo VS Philosopher King
 

Rules:
10 Lines Max
U Go 1ST Cuz I Got Writer's Block
No Crew, Hate, D/R Votes
No Feedin

Thats It G'Luck

Echo, you loser, you can't hope to beat me --
Just make sure you don't act like your name and repeat me.
"Writer's block"? More like "Too busy sucking cock".
No matter WHERE you go down, it comes as no shock.
I'm harder than stone -- I don't fear kids from Flint
whose lyrics are weak and unworthy of print.
This guy's a true Hybrid -- half weak and half lame.
I'd mess up his game -- wait, does he HAVE a game?
Can he turn it up? Can he turn it on?
That's no, and that's no, and that's no, and he's gone.

Beat The Best, Dude U Wishin Battle Tha Truest Bitch I'm Too Complex Through My Scriptin/1
Confess To The Illest Dude Can't Win Cuz My Punches Pressed-O (presto) Like Successful Magicians/2
Your Rhyming's Old I Blind My Foes With A Priceless Flow Rip Your Cerebrum From Its Place And Spear It (spirit) Each Time I Blow I'll Rip Both Your Mind And Soul/3
Hybrid Will Abuse Faggot Herbs Ya Brute's Half My Work/4
Kid's Baffled And Startled Cuz There's No Way To Compute Savage Verbs, All There's Left To Say Im Lost Like Confused Travelers/5
I Boggle Consciences Peeps Get Mad Cuz I Topple Punks And Shit You Got Nothing To Stop These Punches With/6
King Gets Schooled All Your Lines Are Played n Wack Like College Conferences/7
Through A Syntax I'm Taking Civil Actions Then Take And Break This Bitch's Captions/8
I Hate To Rip This Wack One But Everyone Knows I'll Spank-K Like Names Of Little Rascals/9
I'm The Best,You Lack, Wanna Battle Lets Do Dat You'll Get Your Chest Bruised Fag I Don't Step To Wacks I Ain't Faking This Kid's Beat Fa Real Like Neptune Tracks/10

Sry Dawg The Lines Didnt Look So Long In Word

No problem, man, no problem. Well played. And now I guess it's time to wait for the judges' scorecards...

first off this wasnt too string a battle....and in my opinion quite a close call....so heres Devs's breakdown
opener=phil
punches=echo[both were weak tho]
flow=phil[dont likestretched lines]
structure=phil
wordplay=echo
complexity=echo
closer=echo
enjoyment=phil
creativity=echo
overall=echo...
as you can see i marked it quite close...but think echo jus took it....pZ.......return the favour some time.....

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

Uppity Up 1-0

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overall battle was kinda weak actually.....Phil came off with a very wack verse with some simple rhyming skill....no complexity a nice flow but the punches were either weak or nowhere to be found....it was mainly a bunch of filler....

H.E came out and wasn't even that better.....your structure and flow was wayyyyyy off, i mean you were rhyming words that really didn't need to be put together and your punches took too long to come....you did have a better try for punches than your oponent, and punches is what wins battles.......so i give it to Hybrid.....

sorry i can't poll vote but please return tha fav on my battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

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phil just didnt come hard... and hybrid didnt come off as strong either

but phil was kind of simple in my eyes... while hybrid actually came with some creativity and a good vocab. the stretched lines messed your flow up but it still beat phil's verse...

DROP AN HONEST VOTE HERE:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...766#post1041766

All right, this here is very wack. I'll admit it... I had just got here, and I was focusing on flow at the expense of complexity and punches... that much having been said, until I get this battle and my other battle (even worse than this one) voted on and out of here, I can't move forward with some of the new stuff I've been trying. Sorry I can't help you out with voting just yet, but as soon as I reach 100 posts, I'll be sure to vote (fairly, of course) on some battles for people who get the voting finished and me onward to new stuff. Thanks.