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varentao 02-08-04 09:34 PM

(1) Group B Match: Rule v Weapon M8
 
Pick a colour. There's your topic. Further details in main match thread.

Haiku - 5 syllables first line. 7 syllables second line. 5 syllables third line.

DEADLINE: Monday 16th February

rule 02-09-04 08:53 PM

In....

rule 02-11-04 10:54 PM

Red:
Red Carries On Blood
But It Also Remains Pure
Representing Love

My First Haiku...I Don't Think I Have Every line Exact For Syllables But I Tryed

Edited It...and I apoligize i thought it was a number of those stanzas...peace

varentao 02-12-04 09:48 AM

^Er, well though i dig what you did. You only post ONE haiku. So only ONE of those 'stanzas'. We might take up 'extended' types later on in the tournament.

So could you please cut it down to one haiku.

rule 02-12-04 08:08 PM

oh sorry i thought a haifu was a number of those....sorry about that...i'll fix it

varentao 02-12-04 08:16 PM

^As far as i can see, your syllable structure is 5-7-5.

Thanks for ammending it anyway. Let's hope WeaponM8 shows up.

Eki 02-16-04 05:11 AM

^ if not ill gladly fill in :)

varentao 02-16-04 07:18 PM

^Okay, you're in if WeaponM8 doesn't drop by the end of today. Come up with a Haiku for Wednesday. So if he does turn up, you'll take the place of someone else (unless EVERYONE shows up, which is unlikely..). That's two days time. Thanks.

Eki replaces WeaponsM8 if he doesn't drop within the next 7 or so hours.

Eki 02-17-04 09:12 PM

Blue

Ocean and the Sky
are lungs of the planet earth
both are now depressed



Edit : Ok finally got the syllables right ;)

rule 02-17-04 10:30 PM

who cares close enough lol

varentao 02-17-04 10:52 PM

Eki - Yeah, your haiku is 4-5-5. But your deadline is thursday, so there's time to ammend it.


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