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Avenge 02-12-04 10:31 PM

Com vs Avenge
 
Friendly battle
10 lines ill drop first
3-0 ko

Avenge 02-12-04 10:35 PM

Coms shooting BB’s…..Av deplores bombs…
I’ll be the Dot in RB because im always before COM
Adore psalms, Grab his limbs and watch the twig snap
Cuz this battles like this line
.................................................. ...A big gap
Kick back…cuz like feeble n’ OI im quick to dismiss you
Say you “made me”….but get sonned quick when I diss you
I pull pistols have ya hands so high you’ll be wreckin the roof
Yeah, ill admit your DECENT…if I feel like stretchin the truth
Com don’t think just cuz you’re a ‘Vet’ you’ll win
Blah…I cant joke about wits end
…..cuz when the good people left….they let you in

COM 02-13-04 02:46 PM

I just saw this via a tryout link.. i'm gonna drop tonight sometime after work

COM 02-13-04 03:49 PM

blah,,,, just did this at breaktime at work ... no polls so i dont really care

This fag's allready owned... told me on AIM that I'm the man
Your verse smells of shit... and this guys the biggest fan!
So who's the bigger man?... this wigger lies likes he's cursed
Even lying in his check in... theres no "ill drop first"!
Take a pill before you're worse... what you say is stupid
Only way you'd be my match... is if you payed cupid!
I swear this gay's crooked... he's decieving...its so sad :(
you've got more recycled lines... then charity notepads!
This guy's verse was a tryout before mine was designed
But now its next to my mine... one word..... DECLINED

Born To Kill 02-13-04 03:56 PM

Yeah...

Avenge got beat.

Wittier and more personal from Com.

I'd say Avenge lost it when he went gangsta and had him "wreckin da roof".

Why in fuck would you stoop to that?

So, basically, no drop offs from Com...
(though that 'notepad' line did drive by the whack neighborhood, it didn't enter...)

And Avenge had a couple.
(didn't like the 'gap' line...all filler...no punch)
(didn't vibe with his 'son' line either, played)

Winner: Com

Peace

Hit up mine and Feebs or mine and B.I.'s in Elite...
Thanks

COM 02-14-04 03:41 AM

1-0 thx for tha vote....................and in my verse against BI Detained i was referring to Young P....

COM 02-14-04 06:30 PM

upping............................................ .......

Avenge 02-14-04 07:15 PM

Uppin.....

Derive 02-14-04 09:20 PM

Com took this, pretty easily also.

Com: Some nice punches, nice structure, and good flow.

Avenge: Some played punches, structure was ok, and flow was ok. You couldve done much better but you had too many played concepts and some filler.

V/ Com


Hit up my battle against K.Largo up with an honest vote, its set up in elite...

Otherwordz 02-15-04 03:05 AM

I've seen both of y'all come a WHOLE lot iller than this...Com...ya punches were good...but ya multiez and flow weren't as on point as usual...and Avenge...on the other hand...ya multiz and flow were good...but ya verse didn't really have any hard hitting punchez...and since punchez are what winz battlez...I'ma give this one to Com...

Freeman 02-15-04 06:59 AM

nice from both...

COM was more consistent... His punches hit harder at stayed hard hitting through-out...

Flow... Structure... Vocabulary were about the same...

So...

v/ COM

For a more consistent verse...


Pz...


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