Freestyle fo' fun
 

Yo, I cook cats like crack,
Bring it back, I got stats,
More heart pumpin' than a fuckin' heart attack,
I ain't givin' up my reign, is ya cats insane,
Tap my brain to turn water into acid rain,
I bring tha pain like Brock,
More solid than a rock,
You want my skills, hea make a million in tha stocks,
I'ma take you tha top 'til you can't see tha bottom,
Than drop you like Tetris playin' a game of Columns,
Oh shit I'm just raw, More puzzlin' than Saw,
And if y'all don't get it than y'all is just lost,
But pay attention to my sentence,
How I mention and how I say it,
'Cause by tha time you catch it you niggas is gettin' slayed.
Now wha'!!!

A freestyle I just wrote... wha'cha think?
http://community.rapverse.com/editp...tpost&p=2317420

Not feeling it man

90% of it didnt even make sense...

That's why you's lost man.

Oh shit I'm just raw, More puzzlin' than Saw,
And if y'all don't get it than y'all is just lost,

Lol Ok..............

You's funny son, you go around talkin' shit to cats right, but look at'chu kid you go around wit' a quote that says "my feminine side is a lesbian" Wha's that about son.

But yer' Barz of steel huh?......

Yep

And if you want, I will be more than happy to put a loss on your record

I really dont want to though, seeing as I could save you the embarrassment of talking shit and getting KO'ed

Learn your place bitch

eh, this was ok, seen better, work on your structure some, flow was pretty good, just keep workin at it man

hanx fo' tha supprt and feedback, much luv.

Yo im new do you wanna battle . i wanna see what you got
:thumbup:

you the one that wasnt rappin against wolverine over there so you dont be talkin shit i didnt see you spit any ryhmez ..........

chillout nigga

overal - fix up that structure and make it have sence
for a freestyle ain't bad but if you fix it well it will make niggaz feel it, na'm sayin?

keep up hom

Yo, young, chill out son, you wants some of me you got it kid. Just let me know when and where.