Tony Green "Thump"
 

Some new shit yall know how I do it we can knuckle up

"Thump"

Links
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2801154
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2801151

let the feedback come...

uppin to the top

I like it. Your flow got all screwed up in the begining I think, though.

Straight stuff, though.

Flow = 9.5/10
Rhyme = 10/10
Sound = 10/10
Beat = 9.5/10

Overall = 9/10

Thanxx fam if you need me to return the favor hit me up

uppin fo feed....

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aiight RTF

what's hot:
beat is def dope.....

what's coo:
flow, you fall off in a few spots but overall not bad on that
lyrics were nice too
delivery and emotion coo, could be upped a bit

What's not:
not too much

Overall, not a bad track. coo lil listen here. I can see you elevating. keep @ it man. 8/10

EZ

Good lookin Spul yop

uppin fo feed....

beat is some basic south shyt... nice....

yeah, came in a lil off on the first verse... flow is a lil choppy at times but they lyrics is straight...hook should be layered and turned down a bit...second verse is nice... flow is better here... third verse... pretty consistant.... lyrics are still decent.. no real fall offs here

i'd say the only real pitfall was the hook... ya adlibs were ok but still needed some minor adjusting overall i'd give this like an 8 outta 10...werd

Thanxx mayne still uppin

uppin to the top yo quit sleepin

uppin still.......

uppin yo........

is it me or do you sound a lil like Sheek Louch?

but ye beats aight cool choice flow did fall off a lil bit i don't think it warranted a 9.5 unlike what Czar Bishop mentioned but ya flow is good on this track

flows ok sounds a lil like you need to work on the mixing slightly...

but ye aight track

keep droppin :thumbup: