Symm3trik vs J.R. Freeze
Battle Rules:
12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting due 35 mins Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-31-04 at 11:10 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
check in now kid............................so will I.......
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Symm3trik has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 10:42 PM.
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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 10:43 PM.
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your verse all fucked up...believe me this matters
He'll go far......and the sooner he start the better um don't worry kid I know you honest like farmers U continue to show promises............................ ........keeping unbroken record of broken promises kid's screwed.......especially with a verse so wack I don't need to call you a quitter....................... .........he's screwed up every verse that he's had! kid's froze up on his own name........what a shame his freezing............even gave failure a bad name! fuck this......even ice cube's will fucking froze you in the rain......you're as useful as a box of tissues! |
aight now, I've dropped, so drop your verse now!.....
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In comparion, *THIS BATTLE* is kinda like a fuckin’ *REAR VIEW ~MIRROR~*//
Cause *YOUR SKILLS are *MILES BEHIND MINE*, and your *DEFEAT* is *“CLOSER THAN IT ~APPEARS~”*// You *ALL TALK, NO SKILL* You should *WEAR A SKIRT* cause you just *A ~CHEERLEADER~*// This *FAGGOT tries to be a *PIMP* but *HANDLES more *BALLS than *~INFIELDERS~*// Your wack ass couldn’t posses a *DEEP FLOW* if you sailed face first off the *~NIAGRA~*// Cause *sym STEEPIN TO J R* is *MORE POINTLESS* than a *CASTRATED MAN* taking *~VIAGRA~*// (DAYUM!) Your verse doesn’t even pack *SWITCH_BLADES*, my shit spits *VERBAL GUN~HOTS*// You *WOULDN’T BE “TIGHT” if you *DIE-D* and came back in ya *NEXT LIFE* as a *NUN’S~TWAT*// I blaze form the *NORTH POLE* to *SOUTH PARK*, this verse done *KILLED YOU* *MORE TIMES* than *~KENNY~*// Cause you *THREADS* wouldn’t even make *CENTS*(sense) if you robbed *JC ~PENNY’s~*// Your shit’s turned to *FLAT-LINE* flatter than your *CORPSE* rolled~over by a *RANGE~OVER*// I’ll put ya in ya *COFFIN you’ll still never be an *“UNDERGROUND” LEGEND* like *LIL’ FLIP*….*GAME~OVER// |
aight now, uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
Ok...I really hate to do this, but im voting for JR...but JR please take those stupid fuckin //'s out of your drops Symmetrick you forced your structure to be even....shitty punches, shitty personals...shitty everything J r...you dont have to make your punches personals n shit obvious, dont be a fuckin newb...just write it and post it..dont use the //'s and dont use the *'s |
forgot to add...return the favor on one of my battles
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This was feedback posted for Symm3trik
checking the polls..................................
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
v/ jr freeze freeze had some nice punches in this and a good flow symm3trik you need to get some better punches, some of your stuff didnt really make too much sense to be, but good effort freeze takes this one... |
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