check it..feed back please
Im here form the chitown so learn how i get em down,
I come harder than a train while you tied to the tracks on the ground, You can't see me even while you lookin through a telescope Im deadlier than anthrax and a crackhead on dope So what is it I ain't battled but come get me Cause even ya rawest rap line won't hit me I kill for a thrill on watchin ya drool spill so amazed by my talent niggas watchin like tipdrill Im makin niggas go on vacations as permanet Cause they no they need some serious work in my tournament Some of these lines thats people spitten im finna lose it They minds must be going half crazy like musiq Bitches think they win a battle and they the shit..please Niggas wanna see me lose just to feel real pleased Lil kids take in my lesson before they do a teacher But i don't want nothin like my girl alicia If bitches really think they burnin up this rap scene Give me a holla im ready to hit you worse than anything |
for someone from chi town this was pretty weak but for a newb it was aight
u lookin for a battle holla |
yea..it' is weak
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Yo no disrespect shawtie but it needs alot of work, it was really basic an boring, jus being real wit ya
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yea it was pretty weak tho.
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