.iLL. ``vs`` hot clip
 

..10-15 lines..
..Blind spit..
..30 min drop after both checkin..
..no biting, etc..

checkin up, checkin in, let this begin...

in and im writin....
............................

aight im thru... i drop when u drop....
.........

done..

Fuck the introduction, I'm conductin counter-abductions/..1
I'll light your face up like a candle 'n put in a pumpkin/..2
When it comes to skills and wins I'm h1gh3r in numb3rs/..3
Last time I posted near 'garbage' I was puttin flyers on dumpsters/..4

Hot clip sees more dicks than the underwear Hanes/..5
This dude's more played out in rap than lil Wayne!/..6

So...

I'll eclipse your meagre demeanor cus im leaner 'n meaner/..7
Your style needs to be keener and cleaner/..8
Like your girl..
I know shes ugly and I havent even seen-her!/..9

.eND.
This abusive and atrusive rap exclusive was brought and served by the only .iLL.usive/..10

aight lemme drop this bull shit....

aight imma spit first
cuz your rhymes couldn't be 'weapons'
if they were lace up N 'conversed'
fuck killin -ill I'll trade in my 'macs' for 'verses from god'
to blaze 'this bitch' ass nigga like a 'curse from jihad'
I got 'this shit' 'locked' like dead bodies 'drawn' from 'vietnam'
this monkey see monkey do 'corney' shit
ill agrees and nods
I 'guarantee' his 'ill'ness stay felt
he try not to get hit wit this bomb
but its too late cuz he already melt
U C I liquify niggas like bitches B still
see how I 'diseased' ya body so ya soul ashamed 2 B ill
'ye shall b soft' nigga despite how u wanna change
this suckaz 'mind is mine' 2 torture
theirs no runnin from fate
no escape when i grip this AK and spray
one thing i learned in life gotta be a dead niggaz like ill cant hate

aaah.. u corney ass tinker bell muh fucka... uppin

damn ya shit is weak as fuck u expect to beat me wit big words? Yo u need 2 elevate talkin bout u wanna battle a vet... nigga please. A vet will rip yo young ass up. U r a joke....

w/e man, just remember that each time you freepost it counts as a uppin..


uppin 1

If iLL had kept his junk at the same level of his first four lines, he might have took this thing. Those lines weren't hard-hitting but they were clever and that goes a long way with me. Anyone can make played-out faggot jokes. Unfortunately iLL started in with the dick jokes and the "your girl is ugly" stuff which is also extremely played.

Hot clip comes off like a clown talkin' about being a vet and putting no weight on vocab. But he did bring the more effective battle verse in spite of some dumb-ass grammar and nonsense wording, plus the irritating need to put every other phrase in quotation marks. Well, anyway, he put down the better verse so he gets the vote.

where did i say i was a vet isschar? im a newb and im comin up

Aiight, I stand corrected. I thought you were talking about yourself when you said "Yo u need 2 elevate talkin bout u wanna battle a vet... nigga please. A vet will rip yo young ass up."

My bad.

uppin on this sucka....uppin muh fuckas...........

this is my last UP if nobody gonna vote then let this 1 vote (issachar) B a win 4 me. damn this is bull shit.

ill was da winner here. he came wit everything. that was some crazy shit. cant wait to find out who wins this.

vote-ill

yo this nigga is on some bull shit... that pumpkin pie ginger bread rap for lil kids lets get some real votes up this bitch man shit....uppin cuz of this cat...