Selling Mah Soul
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vocal chords spit flames, deep words through profound lips bathe a revolutionary sound fit & made of merry-go-round flipped plays about a sick plague, spoken free without mics, a sort of precision going back to old times, like anarchy, it wasnt born with a system s'like i reformed a tradition, of hip hop & writin through the years and if ya wonderin if god exists, be prepared, cause proof is here dont need a crew to fear, may not be the best- im the only one and i know you rappers spit fake, through plastic phony tongues so i'll unmask the puns, reveal the golden pen n pad on ma shelf still mad at myself, but the scriptures i hold a shit-bag of wealth .. so how much are my writtens worth? im approachin to take it, a univeral motion to stake this i spit verses with jesus, then go play a game of poker with satan hopin to rake in- loot, and get some holy sum of profit, see bq's gonna put on one hell of a show, n son, thats the prophecy your thoughts are weak, they wont phase my scheme your mind will get the seed of doubt, when i misplace ya dreams put my spirit in writing, and man its true, i plan to use wouldnt sell my soul now...only cuz i know what it can produce it all went wrong.. then i shown my work to da lord, but he was bored what i wrote fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it |
lmao dope as hell BQ, that drop was hott, my favourite lines...
fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road ^that was hella creative i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it ^^and thats funny as fuck1 well done girl! :thumbup: |
this was good, flow was nice, imagery and emotion were awesome, very nice drop, keep it up girl
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thx yall fo da feed
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you real cute :love: just as much as I give you for ya looks I'll give you for this piece 10/10 :love:
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man nice really liked this one keep it up BQ u mad good at these like the structure and emotion u showed here too.....imagery isnt that good but aight jus work on that a lil bit more but everythin else is good liked the topic of course and the begining of it is the best there really enjoyed reading this keep it up BQ.....like ur topicals.......
. . . . . . PLZ RTF WIT A VOTE IN MY TOPICAL BATTLES PLZ THNX U VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE................... |
man baby you good nice drop keep em come and keep doin what ya doin holla at cha boy!!!!!!RTF on my OM http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201737
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this was a nice drop...........flow was good and i liked the usage of multi's in your verse.....there was a nice creativity throughout.....these lines stood out to me
im approachin to take it, a univeral motion to stake this i spit verses with jesus, then go play a game of poker with satan keep it up.......... |
thx fo da feed errybody mizz fyre havent seen you n awhile
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^^^nah i ain't been on fo a while been busy y'know..........
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yeah i kno wat u mean
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8.0 . nice ,very nice.
you got a tight flow. i'd like to hear that on cd. what up hit me back? |
thx uppin.........
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