40CaliberHitz "CoRpSmAn" Vs fine mind
 

8-10 lines Nuttin Much Just A Light Battle!
No Crew/Or Hate Votes
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GoodLuck FindMind fams he's spitten first!

when you drop then i'll vote but can u two please vote on my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740
thnx

caliber... is a rookie whos just plain garbage/
got no lyrics dat are decent... just weird and retarded/
i'll be takeing you down... wid one verse breaking you down/
your shit has be outdated... like been waitin anxiously/
for someone to take notice... den people say which mutha fucker wrote-diss/
come back and stomp the living shit outta you... till your dieing uncontious/
lost your confidence... get doctor on da case, or perhaps a brain surgion/
learn a new lesson, my page is marked on you like a book mark/
i like to agonise you.. for just bein gayness/
twist lyrics for the slaughtering... getting the after effect of bein traumatised/

I left-the-whore-dying as he bled-galore-trying to defeat the immaculate one//
I’m hazardous dun, like blind policeman shooting ur shots were inaccurate son//
Feel the crunch-from-the-‘sun’ if it’s about ‘chips’ as you munch-on-the-cum//
Kid ‘whines’ so much I could have sworn we were at a ‘reggae concert’//
I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors//
Faggot I’ll scold ya…in ‘poker’ I come with ‘full house’s like Bob Sagget//
Don’t forget it…my shots noticeably mark ya like shit stains on rabbits//
Inspect the gadgets only to see my punches knock competition unconscious//
I’m righteous…stress n guns meet ya chest, I suggest u proceed on cautious//
Check the flow now...Kid 'whines' so much he’s got a subscription to ‘Royale'//
I 'must be dope' the way kid's trying ta sneak my rhymes 'across the borders'//

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hits knocked you out the water son

Fine Mind your rhymes are too basic and not everything flowed right....come on man you're disgracin your name.

Hitz Good stuffs
Almost everyline was a punch but you had no personals...to me personals are important cuz thats how you know the flow was at least somewhat customized
ALSO!!this line should be erased .....
"Feel the crunch-from-the-‘sun’ if it’s about ‘chips’ as you munch-on-the-cum"

Its an aight line but kid, come on...first of all 3 lines doesn't = 1 bar
and second YOUR OWN RULES say 8-10 lines and with that extra line you have 11

I would vote for Fine Mind just for you breaking ya own rule but his verse doesn't deserve a freebie....on the other hand FINE MIND if you want to push a DQ based on him breaking his own rule thats on you...How do you want your W?

40 cal, u got this, flow, punches, multies, u had everythin over the kid...no contest..

I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors//
Faggot I’ll scold ya…in ‘poker’ I come with ‘full house’s like Bob Sagget

40 best line^^^

lost your confidence... get doctor on da case, or perhaps a brain surgion/
learn a new lesson, my page is marked on you like a book mark/
i like to agonise you.. for just bein gayness/
twist lyrics for the slaughtering... getting the after effect of bein traumatised

didn't really even rhyme^^ fuked up ya flow

vote-40

oh..by the way..vote please.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663

40 won this hands down. lyrical your verse was allover the place. bad structure, bad punches and not enough complicated lyrics. step yah game up dun. anyway 40 nice punches and lyrics. i like you punches,especially the one at the end.-its a lil dull but i never heard it befo.return the fava on lyricalmethod vs. furious

best lines:
Kid ‘whines’ so much I could have sworn we were at a ‘reggae concert’//
I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors//


vote=40

ok
 

40 wins,hands down.....structure,punches,everything
lyrical-structure/flow woz way off
punches weak
ur verses didnt even rhyme?