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Çhö-каhй Miшaйg vs. Jay 286
Rules: follow them! Topics: make your choice... Tracks are due Wednesday May 3 Votes are due Friday May 5 (there is no rule about voting so far but if I see no one votes, I may have to install this) No max time limit, min time limit is 1:00 Good luck and drop the hotness! PS: Don't forget to check one of our sponsors out...  |
yep yep...im checkin
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im doin black pearl.....oh and another one of my crazy twists
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yea........i'm doing translucent conspiracies...
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yea so topic was black pearl....song is called "DO" check it out....... im so creative
DO - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3883340 |
the post says 12:01 but my fuckin comp says 11:49 so i made it on time
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^^ she should let you slide bro....
if you get DQ'd for 2 mins I'd be pissed anyway... |
yea at 8 i checked my pm's n realized this shit was due tongiht....then my girl came over, i had a windown from 8-8:30 to write one verse, n i had to freestyle half of it, n put it all together from 11-12.....then it was back to the girl....so i mean i didnt put much effort into another week....maybeeeeeeeeeeeee if we had better topics...haha, but check it out its still a funny one
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Come on guys, you should know I'm not THAT strict...
Just happy you dropped and if you want better topics Jay, suggest some :thumbup: |
no doubt,
DQ's pritty chill for a "drama queen" !!! :thumbsup: |
Cho - You flowed pretty well on this one. Message came across pretty good too. You and Tito must not like hooks....lol. Anyway, this was a pretty good track, but it was a little hard to follow you and your story on the first listen.
Jay - Hook coulda got a little annoying, but it wasn't to me.....hmmm. Anyway, this song was tight in my opinion. Your flow was nice on this shit. Story was nice too.....lol. I think you had a really enjoyable track. Only thing I didn't like is during the bridge near the end you were just silent, then you came back in like 4 bars later. Vote - Jay.....only slightly though. This was a toughie, but I thought his was a little more enjoyable. |
im sayin shit in the backround during that silence...if you listen really really carefully....its sublimial...haha
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jay beat not feelign it at all
intro is ok kind of annoying lyrics were pretty cool felling the hook presence delivery is pretty good flow was overall good didnt hear it go off until you freed the last part lol then it turned bad you shouldnt have done that last little part idk cho beat is pretty cool different lyrics were goood i got a few messages from thsi track btu honestly i dont think most will get it flow was good no complaints presence was cool nothing special im gonna go with cho jsut by a little bit but both my oyd heads did hteir thing props to both of you |
Cho:
The flow was on point throughout the entire track so nice going on that, may put some more emphasis on certain words or phrases but overall, you had it down. The lyrics itself were good, I like how you built it up towards the ending. Like how you added that last phrase with good emotion. A hook would've made this even better though, didn't consider it? Nice track all in all, maybe a bit short though...would've loved to hear more. Jay: Wooooooo *shakes to the beat* Haha, I love this beat first of all. And you picked like the perfect beat for this topic, good choice :thumbup: Got a great energy on this track, verses were on point for real. I hear the do what you do part in the bridge, good going on that one as well. Stays in the mind, catchy hook, catchy shit as a whole. Feelin this for real, *still shaking* lmao Aight, got two different tracks right here...got one deep, meaningful one by Cho. His bad aspects were lack of a hook and the length of the track, could've been much better if he added more to the song. Then you got the shake track by Jay, got a great energy on it. Only bad thing is lyrical substance but with a track like this, the only goal is to make chicas shake and you succeeded :) So vote: Jay 286, no hate Cho, you had some good shit as well man |
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