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Valor 06-29-04 03:03 AM

Trail Of Death
 
trail of death

some poeople say you have to die someday..
and others wonder how they'll die one day..
do we go to heavin or what lies beyond death..
some care a great amount,lots of people care less..
we will never know till you take the trail..
most likely after you die you may not return to tell..
i find life to be played as if its all a game..
some people find life a gift,others see it as being lame..
is your spirit's future soon to be eternal..?
thats one question you may need to ask your self in a diary or journal..
because human kind may not know,nor ever find out..
some spend life thinkin,others just live life till times out..
some may wonder if god created us ,then who created god..?
not sure and can not ever be sure till death arrives..
winding down to death wondering what comes after?,your heart thrives..
thinkin to yourself why does it happen to me..?
its not just you its billions and billions of other lives..
the trail of death which is present and future,will remain simply a mystery..
thinkin you are the only person that thinks about death,check ur history..
million's have felt the heartache and insanity but found to live with it..
its like a game you playit then quitit,you live then die.
so all you can do is walk the trail of death and wonder why..?

LaTiNKiTTeN 06-29-04 03:22 AM

this was a straight drop...beginnin was stronger..n the closing line...in the middle it fell off a bit..but overall nice drop.....holla

DQ 06-29-04 05:25 AM

Real nice drop, described how i feel sometimes, vocab matched subject perfectly

young01 06-30-04 01:38 AM

Yo I'm feelin your poem playa.That some pretty deep stuff people be thinkin bout mad props.

Valor 06-30-04 02:23 AM

thanx maybe ill get an rb award....lol

fluidmoon 06-30-04 08:16 PM

yeah that was real, and honest man, death is somewhat a touchy subject, but we all gotta face that shit, props for speakin your mind......keep playin the game

God 06-30-04 08:29 PM

damn that was a really nice drop i was really feeling the emotion's and the feeling going toward the piece...nice drop and props

Valor 06-30-04 09:50 PM

thanx yall
uppin

J_Remy 06-30-04 10:08 PM

i agree, nice drop, not somethin wrote about alot

Valor 07-01-04 12:04 AM

thanx uppin

Know-Gimix 07-01-04 03:24 AM

pretty decent... felt the end the most, keep it up. ez.

Valor 07-04-04 06:39 PM

uppin

Valor 07-07-04 01:14 PM

uppin for more feedback

Cocaine 07-09-04 03:37 AM

yo nice drop... im not a real "poem" guy but hey ur good at it.. u dropped what u thought... and it was real good......

Valor 07-13-04 05:19 AM

Upiin


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