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DaTrusHurtz 04-05-07 01:17 PM

9. Alphabetized (3-1) vs. 10. Popcorn (2-2)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Celebrity Rapper Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the rapper you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's rapper. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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Alphabetized as Cage Kennylz

vs.

Popcorn as Xzibit


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
For Full Rules Click Here

Popcorn. 04-05-07 04:25 PM

Okay. Check!! G/L

Alphabetized 04-05-07 09:54 PM

Not you again.
How many?
I'm feeling 10-16.


EDIT:

I'll probably drop close to the deadline.
Sorry for you dropping early dog.


Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3157500
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3157501

Popcorn. 04-07-07 09:50 AM

I'm bored, so I'ma drop now. You get what you get.

Check It.



I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
You seriously suck at battling. This kid is worthless.
So take your lines to West Coast Customs & let them Pimp your verses!!
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!
Lucky it's one battle, b/c you ain't seeing another round.
You'll never be mainstream b/c my punches keep you Underground!
Think you can beat me? Then you better be provin' it.
It's just a big lie, b/c we all know dog, Kennylz is full of shit!!!!
I'm unstoppable, there is no way you are topping flames.
You must be a big Mortal Kombat fan...
.............. b/c I heard you wanna play with my Johnny, Cage!?
I'm done with you fool. I'ma get rid of your wee exsitence.
I mean you could roll up the Museum, & STILL WOULDN'T SEE XZIBIT!!!

Alphabetized 04-09-07 08:19 PM

http://www.donmega.com/wallpapers/Xzibit1.jpg
^^^
Your an ugly dude, and your skill doesn't satisfy my doubt
but shit, dont peep that picture... his nose'll fuckin poke your eyes out!
& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
This broke bitch is washed up, even west coast customs dumped ya dude
so now i'm not waiting for u to run outta G.A.S... just them to run out on YOU
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
So why is it that you always mad? is it the grimey hoes u been attractin?
I saw your movies... and there the ONLY THING on earth worse than ur rappin
And I'd be ashmed too, if I had to pay for action... like drive through sex n go
X Was born in the D... but was raised in the hardcore streets...
......of albuquerque, new mexico :laugh:
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth

Popcorn. 04-09-07 10:51 PM

Good verse fam, vote up!!

Zelph 04-10-07 03:03 AM

I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
ok
You seriously suck at battling. This kid is worthless.
So take your lines to West Coast Customs & let them Pimp your verses!!
played, wack
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!
nice
Lucky it's one battle, b/c you ain't seeing another round.
You'll never be mainstream b/c my punches keep you Underground!
ok
Think you can beat me? Then you better be provin' it.
It's just a big lie, b/c we all know dog, Kennylz is full of shit!!!!
aha, cool
I'm unstoppable, there is no way you are topping flames.
You must be a big Mortal Kombat fan...
.............. b/c I heard you wanna play with my Johnny, Cage!?
no
I'm done with you fool. I'ma get rid of your wee exsitence.
I mean you could roll up the Museum, & STILL WOULDN'T SEE XZIBIT!!!
meh




vs





Your an ugly dude, and your skill doesn't satisfy my doubt
but shit, dont peep that picture... his nose'll fuckin poke your eyes out!
ok
& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
meh
This broke bitch is washed up, even west coast customs dumped ya dude
so now i'm not waiting for u to run outta G.A.S... just them to run out on YOU
ok
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
aha, cool
So why is it that you always mad? is it the grimey hoes u been attractin?
I saw your movies... and there the ONLY THING on earth worse than ur rappin
meh
And I'd be ashmed too, if I had to pay for action... like drive through sex n go
X Was born in the D... but was raised in the hardcore streets...
......of albuquerque, new mexico
decent
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth
nice


Another hard battle. came close but I have to go with Alpha for being more consistant.

Multi 04-10-07 03:25 AM

I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
Ok @ best, nothing too harsh
You seriously suck at battling. This kid is worthless.
So take your lines to West Coast Customs & let them Pimp your verses!!
Wack lmao
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!
lmao cool
Lucky it's one battle, b/c you ain't seeing another round.
You'll never be mainstream b/c my punches keep you Underground!
weak
Think you can beat me? Then you better be provin' it.
It's just a big lie, b/c we all know dog, Kennylz is full of shit!!!!
lol ok nice
I'm unstoppable, there is no way you are topping flames.
You must be a big Mortal Kombat fan...
.............. b/c I heard you wanna play with my Johnny, Cage!?
bleh nah.
I'm done with you fool. I'ma get rid of your wee exsitence.
I mean you could roll up the Museum, & STILL WOULDN'T SEE XZIBIT!!!
NO...played



vs



Your an ugly dude, and your skill doesn't satisfy my doubt
but shit, dont peep that picture... his nose'll fuckin poke your eyes out!
cool
& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
lmao nice
This broke bitch is washed up, even west coast customs dumped ya dude
so now i'm not waiting for u to run outta G.A.S... just them to run out on YOU
ok
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
rofl
So why is it that you always mad? is it the grimey hoes u been attractin?
I saw your movies... and there the ONLY THING on earth worse than ur rappin
bleness
And I'd be ashmed too, if I had to pay for action... like drive through sex n go
X Was born in the D... but was raised in the hardcore streets...
......of albuquerque, new mexico
bleh again, but I still laughed at randomness
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth
cool shit

nice shit here Alpha edge's it though


V- Alpha

Alphabetized 04-10-07 06:44 AM

2-0 Fam....
Cool verse aswell pop.

Popcorn. 04-10-07 03:52 PM

Lmao @ played. I wasn't trying to come dope, I was just sticking to the topic of this league. SMH!

Area51 04-10-07 09:05 PM

Popcorn:
I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!

vs

Alphabetized:
& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth


good battle, I got Alpha edgin it out w/ a lil more consistancy, cool shit

v/ Alpha

DaTrusHurtz 04-11-07 05:26 PM

& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
This broke bitch is washed up, even west coast customs dumped ya dude
so now i'm not waiting for u to run outta G.A.S... just them to run out on YOU
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.

vs.

I'm unstoppable, there is no way you are topping flames.
You must be a big Mortal Kombat fan...
.............. b/c I heard you wanna play with my Johnny, Cage!?

Damn Pop, u let me down man. Ur shit was personal, that wasn't the problem, but too simple. Lots of blandly stated shit. Seemed like in all ur lines u kept tryin' to be witty, but kept failin'. Some played shit like ur closer n' underground line. Cage line was kinda gay, but funny so I quoted it. Alpha, u came nice man, one of ur better verses. Very simple verse, almost every concept was kinda obvious, but most of the concepts were executed well. Even the opener n' closer weren't too bad. Good work man, u got this easy.

Vote - Alpha

Popcorn. 04-11-07 07:26 PM

Hrm, alright. Maybe someday you guys will see me actually try.

bobericc_lyrics 04-11-07 10:38 PM

I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
hell no^^
You seriously suck at battling. This kid is worthless.
So take your lines to West Coast Customs & let them Pimp your verses!!
nah^^
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!
lol, ok^^
Lucky it's one battle, b/c you ain't seeing another round.
You'll never be mainstream b/c my punches keep you Underground!
meh, simple^^
Think you can beat me? Then you better be provin' it.
It's just a big lie, b/c we all know dog, Kennylz is full of shit!!!!
lol, ok^^
I'm unstoppable, there is no way you are topping flames.
You must be a big Mortal Kombat fan...
............. b/c I heard you wanna play with my Johnny, Cage!?
no...^^
I'm done with you fool. I'ma get rid of your wee exsitence.
I mean you could roll up the Museum, & STILL WOULDN'T SEE XZIBIT!!!
nah^^

vs

Your an ugly dude, and your skill doesn't satisfy my doubt
but shit, dont peep that picture... his nose'll fuckin poke your eyes out!
lol, ok^^
& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
lol, ok^^
This broke bitch is washed up, even west coast customs dumped ya dude
so now i'm not waiting for u to run outta G.A.S... just them to run out on YOU
ok^^
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
ok^^
So why is it that you always mad? is it the grimey hoes u been attractin?
I saw your movies... and there the ONLY THING on earth worse than ur rappin
nah^^
And I'd be ashmed too, if I had to pay for action... like drive through sex n go
X Was born in the D... but was raised in the hardcore streets...
......of albuquerque, new mexico
lol^^
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth
ok^^

some ok punches here, popcorn had some problems wording his setups and getting real personals on him, not enough directness toward kennylz.. alpha came with some ok consistency and hit with a few impacting bars.

v/Alpha

Titan 04-12-07 12:32 AM

I'ma have fun with this. I've had enough of kid.
So watch me get rid of C.K. quicker than a Blood turn Crip.
I heard some of your crappy audio, so I know what's wrong with the rest.
You've made Movies for the Blind, but maybe you should make songs for the Deaf!!!

these were ok,could have worded them better though

V$


& your records just ain't sellin... probably becuz u lack clever shit
but you couldnt sell "weapons of mass destruction" ...to a group of terrorists!
Xzibit's career is through... your songs suck too so take a fuckin clue
I thought it was dope when u released "spit shine".. onto my fuckin shoes.
No doubt i'm straight underground... so you'll easily beat me in clout
cuz everyone'd love to see Xzibit... then never again open his fucking mouth

all these were good,the last line the Xzibit line was clever and funny


overall i gotta give it to alpha with more consistancy and a harder verse

\\// Alpha


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