lyric vs AutoMATIK™
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 01:40 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:11 PM.

AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:11 PM.

Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date
You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it
How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget
Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew
When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb"
^Who writes like that anymore, dawg quit using worthless rhymes
Faggot jacked off on a newspaper, just to get with the Times
Jus a fuckin bitch, you aint improving, whackness hasn't passed
Cause this dumbass hit the learning curve, and his computer crashed

Voted For: lyric

vote for lyric, had a better flow and both had good structure,
opener goes to lyric
closer goes tolyric,
matik you need to elaate, lyric even said you spit like a newb,
just being honest.
and the punches goes to lyric only cuz they were funny

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Voted For: lyric

Emcee:AutoMATIK

Verse:
I was declined from IJL … Now Ya crew hopeless
My Spits sick to leave ya shit wet like pump action on super soakers
Now who hard as this ? Yo whole squad is bitch
When im threw, ya crew gonna have to view u threw a glass like aquatic fish
Heres a tip kid … battling me in a key, is the worst way to lose
Face it … you and ya niggas play sick like me on the first day of school
Im punkin this dude wit verbs that’ll leave his stomach in two
You stuck-and-its-true you know imma win. So theres nuttin to lose
You trying to live? How When I eat Punches and until my flow Inflict Hi’
Gunna Have u Grabbin Ya Throat And Gasping For Breath' Like Pneumonia Symptoms

Comments:um...nothin much to say but elevate and hit harder wit ya punches...aiight metas but not really all that ya know..

Marks:
Wordplay - 4/10
Metas - 5/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 5/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 4/10
Enjoyment – 3/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 48/100
----------48%

Emcee:lyric

Verse:
Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date
You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it
How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget
Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew
When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb"
^Who writes like that anymore, dawg quit using worthless rhymes
Faggot jacked off on a newspaper, just to get with the Times
Jus a fuckin bitch, you aint improving, whackness hasn't passed
Cause this dumbass hit the learning curve, and his computer crashed

Comments:well i can safely say that you came harder wit metas and punches...thats what winz the game...

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 7/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 6/10
Overall - 62/100
----------62%

return the favor in my sig.....

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

matik murked this nigga.....lyric had decent personals an punches an some was kinda lame...like jackin off of a newspaper to get with the times.....matik had a tru battle verse an ripped this man from kingdom come

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

punches/personals-automatik, for a fast freestyle in 15 min i think automatik jus had harder hittin punches and more that made sense, lyric attempted at some and shit but i jus felt they didnt hit as hard as automatiks

creativity and vocab-i think auto got both of these, a higher vocab level was put in here then lyrics verse and it was more creative put for a fast verse

no hate on nobody honest vote good luck peace

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

"Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date
You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it
How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget"

^the beginning was the best part of your verse Lyric so good job with that, good job to the both of you but i really think that Lyric took this one due to his better punches and his flow was just a lot more on target than the other dudes, good job to the both of you but i think that Lyric just took this battle EASILY...

v/ Lyric.

Switched

^OH OH OH.. i didnt know i had to post it in a certain box... crap, i am new to this whole battle hack ish.. so sorry, can a mod make my vote go to Lyric?

thank you.

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

aight this was a pretty tight battle, both people came hard here and i respect that.. this ones gotta go to automatik tho with better flow, punches/personals and structure... both had good wordplay and all that but i was really feelin autos verse.. i especialy liked the opener on that shit auto.... good stuff

good battle from both of yall but this one goes to automatik with better punches personals structure and flow... great battle, no hate to lyric but this one goes to automatik

VOTE- AUTOMATIK

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

lyric: decent verse.............

your downs were obviously your played lines......
it flowed smoothly and was never choppy..........
punches were decent some effective................
originality...some were some weren't.................
overall: 6/10

auto: slightly above average verse

flow got choppy sometimes in my opinion.........
punches were effective and half-decent..........
originality was better...................................
overall: 7/10

honest votes please .............