Accomplishment vs SeRvIcE
 

20 lines
no recycling
no dick riding
no gay shit

aight spit somptin then i'll spit cuz i gotta get some of my battles closed

Ill drop tomarrow night, Ill write some shit at school.....................

fuck dat no pre written bitch spit it off your dome thats why its called freestyle

lol, its a battle, accomplishment please show me where it says freestyle, if you really wanna get fryed ill drop in a few

drop in a few then

Your mom thinks the head of my dick is handsome

Spit Chemical toxins to seek and destroy your feeble exhistence
Battling you Im taking paths of least resistence
I'm a Front runner dogg and im callin you out
what kind of name is accomplishment with nothin to brag about
Boldin your verse for voters, just to exploit your weakness
Cuz fruity bitches get their courage measured in rotten peaches
yo nigga i rock raps matter fact I shouldnt try against this ho
cause his verses are something to laugh at like the chapelle show
I got this on lock, and may i ask if your respected again?
Cause I got 10 posts, zero battles and im expected to win
Were sick of your odd bar structure and simple minded raps
I'll take your whole atTIRE and leave you on hub caps
Be careful where you mess, or who you grind and test
because my guns'll leave you more fucked up than kanye west


WuN

Yo bitch can i get some service...sure but i dont know who dis herb is..but stay knockin him to pieces like one leg lepers in roller derby's.../
yo first battle i show everyone they cant see a bigger chicken in cock fights..you get knocked right...cuz my rhymes get dropped tight.. shininn more than the northern lights.../
print out mah verse and staple it to ya chest...so everyone you see knows you flauntin da best.../
one verse can bring ya whole block down...wit my sound leave ya ass dead in ya own ghost town.../
I'm tellin ya now your verse sucks so bad its amazing...cuz i get more kicks out of it than in eastbay magazine.../
you get popped more times than caps on six packs...my raps gotcha askin ya self about yo bitch slaps...

yo quck battle vote it up

A'ight...heres the breakdown...

Punches: Service
Flow: Service
Vocab: Service
Personals: Service
Opener:Hmm.......Accomplishment I guess...not by much...
Closer:Niether
Enjoyment: Service

Overall: Service

No hate...but Service just outclassed Accomplishment...Accomplishment dawg, u just need to work on structure and rhyme positioning...I didn't understand a lot of the lines because they were so scattered out. Service...nice structure and flow...some nice personals...dope shit.

upping............................................ .

breakdown for service:

flow:good from start to finish didn't see any weak spots in this 7/10

volcab:another good effort put forth here it was constant and didn't hurt the flow only helped it overall 8/10

punches:great personals i thought my fav, "what kind of name is accomplishment with nothin to brag about" nice name flip. anyway good job 7/10

overall:22/30 good verse

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:your bars were really long but you threw some multis in to help for the most part it did aside from the first bar with 'service,herb is,derbys' that didn't really work for me overall though 6/10

volcab:good use nothing amazing but overall good keep working on this cause it can never be too good 6/10

punches:could of been better you spent most of the time rappin bout how you were better not how he is so bad your best line,"print out mah verse and staple it to ya chest...so everyone you see knows you flauntin da best.../" try harder here probably just cause you were rushed but 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--pretty good battle both had the mechanics of a dope verse down but the punches was were the difference in this battle was made my vote is for service

upping............................................ .............

yo uppin for votes on this one yo

up.

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