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Paranoid vs Ysdat
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No OYD Voters Period. 1 minute Min No maximum Song battle. Emcee must choose from list of song names below: Still high Why remain talking? Who Am I? They dont give a fuck Destiny I confess Let the music Revolutionary Warfare Nothing Without You I added some other topics cause I had some coo idea's about them. Goodluck Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-05-06 at 06:44 PM Must drop verse in 9000 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
Ysdat has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-06 03:34 PM.
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Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-06 06:59 PM.
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Who Am I?
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4721328&q=hi Hi fi is better, take note SC fucks up my quality.. if you have trouble hearing it read along with the lyrics like church choirs. Who am I? Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw Who are we? seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting man who the fuck is this kid came out of now were he came here to show fear implanted in your chest like a breast implant the best just cant confess this cunt is a the opposite to a mondless drone your time is gone ill mold my own throne fuck your feelings record labels, we above your dealings 7th end productions boy!! never end or giving a fuck you toy underground emcees about to clown if these labels think we gone sign a deal independant bro, signed and sealed cant hustle the hustlers can you bro hell mother fucking no we gone blow every week Ill show who I am?! Who am I? Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw Who are we? seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting man, the way I shut dummys up, you think im'a ventrouliquist ive been dead and its more than silent after life I feel more comforatable after night each time i grab the mic i have to write somthing new from brain fuck panadol,musics what i do for my pain but who would just claim they making moves when they not resembling a tooth you will rot Like dots with knifes, I abuse your spot takes to seconds to flop years to be established our cares simply have vanished who are we? we aint no one great, we just like you just some dudes creating art on the mic Who am I? Poet raised rough and raw the one you gaised up and fucking saw Who are we? seventh end rugged on the streets of massey never die we forever lasting |
Voted For: Ysdat
ysdat, your vocal qual is beat. some mixing would work wonders on your vocals lmao 'can you grow hair' lol. hook could have used another layer. your styles ok, not a whole lotta rythm in the rhyme scheme. song's okay. not stellar, but not anus either. para, you took a hot beat and made it a not-hot song man. you could use a heaping serving of presence. your hook sounds more interesting than your verses. some parts sound like you're not even rapping over the beat, like you're jsut rapping on your own and pasted it over this beat. your rhymescheme is pretty basic and it sounds like you wrote this without a beat then tried to fit it over one. battles liek this are always stupid on numerous levels to me because eyou're trying to compare apples to oranges with these different song types. i'm just gonna look at execution and neither of you guys got it perfect, or close to perfect, but if i had to say one person outdid the next it'd be ysdat. all around more polished and his voice carried more emotion, sounded like he was more serious about what he was saying liek he believed it more. 1 |
This was feedback posted for Ysdat
polls .
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up .
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ok this is really wack... .
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This was feedback posted for Ysdat
honestly i think it would have been better if u chose the same topic..
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This was feedback posted for Paranoid
you fuck suck dont bring that wack shit to the us fuckin wack job
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Voted For: Paranoid
This battle is really hard to try n compare.... because you both are going from two tottaly different directions... i felt Paranoids joint alot more becase of my state of emotions....i liked Paranoids beat, went really good with the topic that he had... I just wasn't feeling Ydats flow, or his topic at all....i can break it down more if you'd like me too.... hope you can return the favor in my text battle agaisnt Capo~Status Good luck to both of ya Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow man finally a random voter haha. thanks for that vote I'll hit your battle up right now cause im feelin generous today.
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My name was Don Of Mics btw......so that might makin lookin for it easier...
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why dont you just pm me the link cause i cant find shit.
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